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This world is about swords everything about them makeup you: how rich you are, your pride and your dignity.
Not having one is like not being even alive, so what happens if you won't don't have one. Well that, unfortunately, happened to the very soul Eader.
After losing his mom to some kidnappers and having hefty hospital bill to pay, he makes his way to Sawarts school for swordsmen and swordswomen.
There he will find all types of things happening to him.
How will he go through, with the stick given to him by a perverse, rich, old man?
Everybody has a sword unless you have Swordancia.
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Hope you people are enjoying my story, if you haven't read it, please do. If you don't like it then you don't have to read it and please give your review about it. Also, expect spelling mistakes.
I'll start by complimenting the idea, it's interesting in and of itself but that is it. The writing from the onset doesn't flow, we don't know anything about the setting we are thrust in, and no good character background. The story switches POVs often with no warning, literally the next sentence will be involving 2 characters in a completely different location and you figure it out a paragraph or two later which is confusing and a put-off. Not to mention basic he/her grammatical errors and misspelling have me dropping at ch 44. Also, what is the overarching plot here? What is his goal besides rescuing his kidnapped mom, I mean that can't be all there is to this right? Again great idea, bad execution.
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Hey guys, I just wanted to change and clear a few things: This whole part of the story is a prologue of what I want to publish. I gave up on this because I could not change what I wanted. So I will be publishing Swordancia, after the events occurring. This is still part of the story, just wanted to change things up a bit, but also start from the beginning. Thanks