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Survivors of the End
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Cien Millones de Personas se Salvaron del Final, Cien Millones de Sobrevivientes que ahora vivirรกn en Otro Mundo muy Diferente al Suyo.
Autor: The Wind Jaeger.
Editor: The Wind Jaeger.
Fan #1: The Wind Jaeger.
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Good start... Like ur story... Work hard author gambate..... Cayok2.... All the best........... .............................. ........................... ........................ .............................. ............................ .......................
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Membuka SPOILER
Es realmente una buena novela, espero con impaciencia una nueva parte. Mi parte favorita es el planteamiento y como se desarrolla poco a poco, creo que eso lo que le da calidad a la historia.
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Exelente historia, me atrapรณ. Hasta ahora me ha gustado mucho, quiero mรกs capรญtulos para ver cรณmo se desarrolla, ademรกs de algunos errores gramaticales en algunos capรญtulos, estรก muy buena.
Por el momento me ha gustado la historia, se ve con mucho potencia; el desarrollo del personaje principal es algo lento y tengo dudas hacia donde irรก dirigido.
The world background is not so bad, but everything is going to fast. The mc became extremely powerful in like 15 chap. he is not op like in other novel but development is way to fast for me. But this is not the worst... iโm not realy good at english (i m french), but the writing quality is crap even i can see how terrible it is and i canโt take it anymore (there is more than one mistacke every sentence...). So yeah this novel need editing and it will be ok, or at least passable.
Decent story but in desperate need of an editor I have been trying to enjoy it but the broken English and flip flopping of pronouns make it hard for the story to flow.
U got my attention... Update more More More More More More Potato And Potato More Potato Potatoes Knife Chopping Frying Potatoes chip Eat Reading
muy buena historia me gusta ojalรก continuarรก deseo ver como se desarrolla y no dejarlo a mi imaginaciรณn.....................................
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it get my attencion now...keep it up n if the story continue be interesting even it need spirit stone i dont care....for the starter dont mind other people n keep it up