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In the chaos of 2020, Ethan Jones wakes up with memories of a world that isn’t his own and the musical genius of a world where music has reached the peak of entertainment. Armed with unmatched talent and a head full of unwritten hits, Ethan faces a question that could change everything: what will he do with the songs that never existed?
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what the update schedule would love to read more chapters. been a while since I read a good fanfic story
"You’ve created something truly special. Keep writing – the world needs more stories like this!"
this is the best story Read in months love intrust Billie Elise (music duos) fuel eminem song for p.didy
Thank you for sharing your story!I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep writing — you're doing great! 🚀Thank you for sharing your story!I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep writing — you're doing great! 🚀
It's a good idea making Ed not part of the world but could be better by making other artists not on the world so there's diversity in his song. Story does get all over at times but if you can speed up the story and start adding a lot of other artist reaction then I think the story would be elevated
VERY good so far as long as u dont insert too much drama and keep politics meaning both government and company out it will be awesome. i understand having to put some drama but i just dont want the story to fall into a mess of constant drama just cause it all u can think of to make it keep going. it would be good to have some of the songs wrote out when he sings them and reactions put in between verses just a thought but the way ur doing it aint bad. also it would be good to name the original artist so people can look up an listen to the right song.
"Superstar is a celebration of ambition, resilience, and the pursuit of greatness—highly recommended!"
Story is nice and I like the Mc and his family, few things kinda is mess and but still story has great potential. I Personally looking forward to read more. ..... .... ... .. .
for realism I would suggest incorporate the good and bad side of things, romance,breakup, smoking, alcohol,party,and some fun and also emotional and mental stuff to give his songs more meaning,i know his songs come from space but wouldn't hurt
really like this ff. Only thing you can do better on is making longer chapters or doing more chapters. ......................................................................
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like the newest chapter is the main character just gonna focus on music or is he going do other things in entertainment
The story lacks depth, and the characters make illogical choices. Who the MC is and what the new world is in are poorly explained(outside of the synopsis). The MC then takes a contract that will take 10% of all his earnings to his agent. He then allows his first YouTube paycheck to be delivered to his agent's bank account, which makes no sense. It's a great story idea that is poorly executed.
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dropped chapter 20 1..1 dimensional characters 2..unrealistic view count for a song that mc posted online from an unknown acckunt within 24 hours 3..unrealistic reaction due to the 1 song 4.. within 20 chapters author time skips twice instead of building character development 5...lack of awareness of the mc he knows he isn't in own universe yet 5b. doesn't research what is different 5c. doesn't think about his own family and how they have changed due to different reality 5d. doesn't research if the song isn't already available 6.. name of the sister wtf Positives 1. author responds 2. author corrects mistakes once pointed out 3. you have 100 chapters to read
Well, the concept is great but the conversation is a whole lot messy and there is no sense just things are happening in baseless order, and no world-building and character are building if it can be improved then it will be good but from my experience,e I can say that this novel is getting to hiatus...