Sunshine on Multiverse

LV 4

Madara_Otsutsuki_

Sorry, but i don't want weak mc. It doesn't even contain r- 18 and harem, so don't put in the tags to gain readers (i only read eight chapters but i peeked in the other chapters too and saw nothing that will keep me read this)

LV 4

iori143

why add transformation if the goddess made the body for sunshine? why not like mael no physical change, and why keep lying to annie that feels like going to bad flag if she knows the truth?

LV 6

FAP_Master_

Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.

LV 3

LiquidCallous

it has this form of speech "blah blah blah example example" - name. this is heathen speech and automatically puts the novel into trash tier, as it's nigh impossible to be able to express how the person is speaking, what he is doing while speaking, and this author obviously didn't do the impossible

LV 3

Mark_Dens

I wish for you to continue this it is a really good aot fanfic. the plot was good,the character was good it was fantastic please dont drop it. it was almost a month since the last update i will wait for the story to continue.

LV 3

Mark_Dens

All in all it was a good fanfic its just the update is very slow but if they update more it will be one of the best.🤗🤗🙌 I Hope You Can Boost The Updates.

LV 1

vastolord_9266

good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

LV 14

fetishman

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LV 4

_VOIDLESS_

Just testing the waters for now let's see if this is worth reading I'm pretty sure I don't know what I'm going to do a if a few things turn out to be ugly and it sucks but anyway.

LV 12

Silver_Epsilon

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LV 2

Ilyas21

I read 33 chapters to see if the writing will be good than before but no the mc is weak and like dog behind ani doings thing useless so for all of that i can say that this fanfic is a trash and i dropped

LV 1

DaoisteHo6ya

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LV 1

DaoistMgP6pU

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LV 4

madman1010

its okay took a bit to long to get the ability but it must be necessary for the character development, all in all its good, grammer mistakes are nearly non existing

LV 4

Silver1Savant

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LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

Mc simp, beta and dum. Mc WEAK. Mc is pathetic and behaves like a Chinese protagonist in a cultivation novel (meaning Mc is a young master). [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

LV 3

ZHODIAXK

I quite like the way the romance goes.

LV 2

Ivair

É uma boa fanfic ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................