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jeanpierregerardo

I liked the character that reincarnated, and the implementation of "group chat" is already very used but something interesting if you know how to handle it. - And it would have been more interesting if they were only comedy characters and not so much magic, but the author's taste is, so it remains to continue with what there is. - The beginning with the acceptances was weird, but the same since the author is still a newbie, and not to mention how he can use the same as the naruto anime (since I am not very knowledgeable, but if a fan comes, I would give you a paragraph of what it does if it's okay and all those notes). - Another would be that he did not get too involved in the anime plot, that is, if you see an anime that you liked and want to intrude, it is better to just let it pass, better worry about how to improve his strength, etc. - It is a story to pass the time, because if you take it seriously, you would be questioning why it does this, why there is this, why get into it xD, it is a story that has potential but is still incomplete. -and to finish, hopefully the girl is "Hori", although she is toxic, she is a good choice and not to mention her attitude is what makes her interesting xD.

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Comalet

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M2skMan

The novel is really great like the plot of the story and also really like the romance to it not to fast or to slow. I highly recommended the novel.

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LinXuan

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Kono_Dio_na

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4Lords_Ace

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twisting_edge

I love this story yep

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DetachedDreamer

if you can get past the horribly broken English then there is a really good story to be found here. its unique enough and the story is developing well. i don't know if ill be able to keep reading though, its hard to ignore the mistakes every sentence.

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Yasin_Bahrami

very good please dont drop it halfway .................................................................................................................................................

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Asura_Of_Gluttony

Itโ€™s amazing โ€ฆ. ::::::::::::::::::::::;:;;;:::::::::::;:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

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TempeGoreng

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Gabichu_Yeah

Nice novel!!! Horimiya prota is niceee! ..................................................................................................................................................................

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Aldyo_Gazeni

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_Medeiros

so far i'm enjoying the story [๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€]

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IHopeYouAreHappy

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VyonZee

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