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Steel Legion
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Welcome to post apocalypse! If given the chance for a new life what will you choose? If your life is once full of lies, will you choose to drown yourself with it or jump to the abyss?
My life was once filled with lies before the Legion. Faulty facts are implanted to our brains, knowledge that is nonexistent. All of these nonsense they fill your head till it bloats of ignorance.
That's right, that is what I thought before joining the Legion. A band of mercenaries in a post apocalyptic world. They are no pushovers and trust me, they will steamroll anything that is against their way.
Did I make the right decision? It's up for you to decide!
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Quality writing with beautiful descriptions. Your grammar is quite good and I appreciate the engaging way you write. The world buildup is well done, and the characters are clearly portrayed. While I must confess this isn' t the type of story I would normally read, I nevertheless truly enjoyed it, and I believe fans of the genre would take great pleasure in reading a work such as this. Take care, I wish you a lot of fun continuing your writing.
When i read first few chapters, this novel remind me Attack on Titan where human live in an encapsulated space but of course, both this novel and AoN has different story and charm. Tbh, I like Damon (why don't you give him another name because Damon remind me of Demon). He's brash and mature. Your world background is quiet detail but i hope you give more details. My random idea: an infectious disease suddenly emerged in the domes that it endangered the life of the inhibitors. Heheheh Keep your good work!!! :D
The story is pretty good the character development is pretty great same for a few other aspects. however like the other review there isn't enough to for story development yet so im leaving it at a 4 star for now everything else i like so be sure to upload more :)
So far so good, I like the way you showcased every bit of detail for every characters' actions. But because it's only 3 chapters, I can't give a review of the story development, so I leave it 4star for now.
This is good! I usually enjoy stories from this genre, and your novel is truly a thrill to read. If I had to say something slightly critical, it would be that you have some small typos, but these could be fixed easily. Mostly in chapter three, an example is, "I'm a bit drowsy of last night's watch" and "He is expert in jungle warfare and survival." As I said earlier, these are small typos and ones that I would normally skim over when reading online. I really hope this didn't come off as too severe though, because I truly enjoyed reading your novel so far. Keep up the good work!