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Starting the Multiverse journey from SAO
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Inexplicably gifted with a unique system, Rifat is granted the power to journey through an endless array of anime and novel worlds.
With the ability to create and distribute subsystems to various original characters, he quickly rises to the top, becoming the most powerful and feared character in every world he enters.
But his ambition doesn't stop there - he also indulges in the pleasures of each world, growing his own personal harem and living life to the fullest.
Join Rifat on an epic adventure as he conquers one world after another and fulfills his ultimate desires.
Warning:
1. Read this story as wish fulfillment. That way, you will not be disappointed if the quality is not up to your standard.
2. English isn't my first language, so you might find some grammatical errors.
3. I am still an amateur in writing, So, please be lenient during giving reviews.
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there's no talking or any scene other than " he took her to amusement park they enjoyed it ". There is little to none humane dialogue characters seems to be one dimensional. MC has long monologue and boom things happened already. There's no sense of progress or anything of variety.
Tingkatkan keahlian mu. Semangat menulis bab bab baru. Walaupun carita nya tidak mengesankan, tapi tidak buruk. Karena ada di rute harem. Buat jadi se logis mungkin. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
novelmu bagus, tapi sayang sekali alur ceritanya tidak bisa dinikmati, dan terasa hambar ketika dibaca, semoga kedepannya bisa diperbaiki lagi, sekian, terimakasih, semoga harimu menyenangkan
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Honestly an amazing premise. Just ruined by the kayaba one. In an SAO fic, I would expect the MC to undergo the dangers. Cause it doesn't feel genuine otherwise. The characters also feel a bit 2 dimensional to me. But I like the use of subsystems just not the way it was executed. I may or may not come back to this novel. I'll Wait and see till it has some more chapters.