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Starting from primitive world, building the strongest divine kingdom

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Penulis: Doubleyolkeggs

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Enzo ventured into the primitive era, chosen as a priest by the Crimson Star tribe and emerging as the leader, awakening numerous extraordinary abilities in the process.
In order to enhance their way of life, extensive reforms became necessary.
Mystical sorcery and modern technology advanced hand in hand.
While other tribes still dwelled in caves, the Crimson Star tribe had already gained prominence, constructing sturdy brick houses.
While other tribes were still using primitive wooden spears and stones, the Crimson Star tribe had forged ahead with iron tools.
In the midst of other tribes worrying about food scarcity, the Crimson Star tribe was reaping bountiful harvests of various grains.
Furthermore, they possessed an unparalleled army of totem warriors.
In response, Enzo, embraced by the luscious temptress and leading the enigmatic cat maiden, earnestly expressed, "I truly only sought to improve our way of life. How did I inadvertently elevate the tribe into a divine realm?"

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    Doubleyolkeggs

    Hello everyone, I'm the author Doubleyolkeggs, and I'm thrilled to be serializing my new book here. This is a story about transmigrating to a prehistoric world, which might be a bit niche, but I've spent a lot of time contemplating the world-building for this narrative. I hope to present it to you in a very engaging way and I hope you all enjoy it and find ample joy in reading it![img=recommend]

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    MK_Infinity

    I'm currently on chapter 60, and this novel has a lot of potential to be discovered. As you can see in the synopsis, the story starts in the primitive era where the MC has the power of the Tree of Life. The MC can help a person reach their full potential and heal the injured. This is just the starting point of his power. By the way, based on the story, it is a harem. So if harem isn't to your taste, leave we don't want you here. But if you're interested in a compelling tribe story, then read this. Lastly, I'm just curious does he have any children, author? It's been months, but there is no outcome.

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    MightyEagle

    Great book, a real page turner. The excellent world building and kingdom building are such a rare find on Web Novel. I got hooked reading this book from the beginning.

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    Yellowpuppy

    The story of this novel is just too exciting; it’s the most thrilling plot I’ve seen so far. I hope to see the protagonist lead his tribe to develop step by step! It’s truly something to look forward to.

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    SYED_AFAQ

    Arthur is there any Yuri or ntr in it...

    2mth
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    Whisk92

    A great novel that makes me reluctant to skip even a single chapter. I’m eagerly anticipating the protagonist’s future growth. Writing such a novel isn’t easy; it requires a lot of accumulated common sense and knowledge. I’m looking forward to the content of the author’s future works.

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    BigWhiteGoose

    The setting of this book is very interesting, and the protagonist doesn’t have any superpowers. This kind of novel can keep readers engaged for a long time; it’s truly great!I really enjoy this novel; the content is incredibly captivating, and the story’s pace is very tight. It’s definitely worth reading, and I will keep following it and continue reading! I am willing to recommend this novel to my friends. Honestly, it’s truly fantastic!

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    Blazzing18

    This book is good but it only lets u go to chapter 35 before u have to u passes witch almost all other books let u go to at least chapter 40 so in that regard this book suck and I wont use passes unless itspast chapter 40 at the very minimum!!

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    Vassitri

    as of chapter 141 I've enjoyed the story. the world building is slow but detailed, characters are distinct, but could use a bit more detail. the storyline is good as well. my biggest complaint is the constant change of he/him/she/her. characters are introduced and referred to as male, then 2 paragraphs later are "she/her" then back to male again. dozens of chapters after a character was introduced (Yara) I still have no idea if they are a man or woman because of the pronouns changing constantly. this problem is not exclusive to this character, but as a whole, pronouns are constantly flip-flopped.

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    Xzerts
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    Повествование рваное, действия персонажей нелогичное. Лор интересный. Точно не 5 звёзд. Хотя задумка интересная, автор непоследователен в своих действиях и не учитывает множество нюансов. Если ты пишешь историю про развитие племени, то напиши ее хоть нормально

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    ImJustOneGuy

    Good book. Please don't drop it author. I'm waiting for more chapters to binge.

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    Troy34

    Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better

    2mth
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    krssto

    great story and world building , the protagonist is smart.

    3mth
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    BWbear

    The reason I like this book is that it makes me feel the story is completely real and logical. Unlike other novels that feature superhuman abilities, which can feel quite unrealistic, this one stays grounded. That’s why I will keep on reading!

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    Bisker_Islam

    Do you have pictures of beautiful women or not?....................................... ................................................................

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    1Redhead1

    personality trash mc like disdain towards primitive people without much worldly experience (what do you expect from primitive people) and laziness to teach them knowledge to quench their curiosity etc. with a messy way to uplift the tribes livelihood and organized functioning society, he just bombarding them with things here and there without proper planning.

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    Lupita_Flores_2499

    Es muy interesante y me encanta la forma en que se va desarrollando la historia.

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    MiizStudz

    decent story. decent writing. I have not gotten far, but so far it has a lot of potential to go places. I guess we will see. I hate to see a good story line fall short so 🤞. if I finish I will comment with an update .

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    RoadWolfProduction

    Hey Can you check out my book “I BECAME SUPER RICH AFTER DISCOVERING A MINIWORLD IN MY BOOKCASE “ Thank You🙏🙏

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