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Sora transmigrate into the world of DxD with the Annihilation Maker at the start. Watches as he dominates the world with Digimon.

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Radioactive_Noodle

idk man the idea seems interesting but the cape of the fic does not make it look good

2yr
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NoizJr

It's Digimon... What else do you need? (っ'-')╮=͟͟͞͞🎁) ゚д゚ ) ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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Mercury_Dragon

really hope this continues can't wait for the next update............................................................ ..........................

2yr
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Zero093
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It's alright so far. Writing quality could use some polishing up, but a good beta reader should solve most of the issues. The dialogue feels a little stilted but that might just be me. Other than that I'm liking what I'm seeing so far and look forward to seeing how the story progresses.

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Weirdo

Well.. I just finish this up and have to say that it's not what I expect. AM, a sacred gear that depend on your imagination, create countless monster with limitless abilities as you want. So it's kind of irk me when author focusing on digimon only. I can understand author love for digimon and to easily keep track instead of OC creature. I understand and it's good, solid for author plot. But I don't like it because it's limiting. Anyway, the plot is a bit cringe and kind of 'Tee-Hee!' moment that I don't like. Like.. Hurm.. Well, not my cup of tea. So good luck author and don't mind the star rating. I rate it according to the rating itself, not what I think of this ff.

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NappyAfro

i love Digimon i haven't read yet but 5 stars youtubeyoutubeyoutubeyoutubeyoubefghtghjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjhtdrshtjyutdryjethgnhrmuyejthjyrmue,tkrstjy,uekyrfh,etdsykdtjk,jetukyjtmryjethqjmywmuj6ymetyemhyjmhyrjhmyjrhmsryjhjyuj,dkutj,t

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Imperialista

10/10 kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkajjakakakakakakakakakakkakakakakakakakakakakakakkaakakkakahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhhahahaha

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