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In a Galaxy, Far, Far Away on the Planet Lok in the Outer Rim. A young Feeorin awakens something that shall change the fate of himself and the Galaxy in ways one could never imagine—all thanks to a blue screen that only he can see.
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ForestOfDarkness Berpartisipasi 257 - SCP_913 Berpartisipasi 132
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I've been reading on this platform for over a decade now. I normally get tired of kingdom building because it gets repetitive pretty fast. however this is the BEST kingdom building fanfic I have ever read 10/10 must read if you enjoy fanfics
A fun Star Wars story that more or less squinted at the Yautja part. The kingdom-building tag is the most important one and his system helps him out. It's worth a read. Slight spoiler. My one real criticism would be how out of character the first encounter with the Nightsisters and Jedi was. They seemed to show up just to ask a question and not care at all about what he would be doing. You know, for something the entire universe felt.
10/10. No joke. I don't give that lightly, yet this one deserves it. The fact that something so good, that would be one of the top fanfics even on fanfiction.net or ao3, still isn't even in the top 5 blows my mind. We gotta get this higher.
It's quite good my man, especially for a new writer! But it can get all over the place with him sometimes being too overpowered, then you nerf him by having the system take the overpowered units away. Shouldn't have included them in the first place if that's the case and name-changing on main characters is confusing but other than that good job.
As of Chapter 29.WQ: 2 - Not quite MTL but definitely not good.SD: 3 - Adequate but not good.CD: 1 - Wet Cardboard Boxes is the best way i could describe the characters. The MC is forgettable, The Side Characters are Forgettable, the author appears to try and give everything a light and comedic tone but it's not funny.US: I don't know, i forgot to check, so 5.WB: 3 - Alright, although the timeline is unclear and it appears to be AU.
not bad but not for me, MC becoming a force user and recruiting disciples just killed all my 'willingness/desire' to keep reading... I was expecting more of a True Yautja/Predator MC, where he would use the tec from the Xeno universe, but now with him being a force user, he is just another guy like any other Star Wars fic, nothing new.
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My friend, this is a kind story. That hooked me up from the beginning, and the MC has excellent development throughout the chapters. The story is neither fast nor slow. I can’t wait to see Jial mastering both sides of the force.
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Reasons why I rated this so low…. 1. It’s a choice system, the main character will never have a original thought throughout the entire novel. 2. On his first choice he literally goes against what he was about to do because of the choices. 3. Also on his first choice it was a summon, you’re 2 chapters in and your already summoning shit from another world. 4. Hes ugly.
It’s good.. The issue I have is the system rewards are all over the place. I wish it stuck with Aliens instead of going to w40k
Honestly its just a system with Yautja equipment given and more force and lightsaber so idk but the story plot is great read!!.
Great star wars fanfiction it had an intresting concept and plot and the writing quality was good. It was a joy to read and end enjoy this work.
I was just scrolling through ranking .The name is enough to catch my eyes........Perfect plotline and one of its most unique kind if story .
The system literally killed this story for me...........................................................................................................
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Very good so good in fact that I cannot wait for more. This book is a gem hidden in plain sight.
the best advice I can give to new writers like you is to set yourself a specific goal, for example. 1 new episode per week one new episode for every 100 power stones (if the story hits a dead end or things don't go the way you want, make sure you time jump directly and finish the story, it will be appreciated more than an unfinished story