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Shadow Slave: The Holy Emperor
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This is a self-insert story, and yes, I got rid of Sunny because I felt like it. I am also stealing a few attributes and ideas from other fanfics. (I will be putting the names below this)
This is my first attempt to write a fanfiction, and I'm taking inspiration from damn reincarnation for the aspect. I'm going to be putting in OCs. (there will be a picture)
Weaving a New Web
Warning: There are cuss words. Also, the R18 tag is a maybe, just in case I ever decide to.
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- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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It’s good I like it a lot but the only thing I can say to fix is the beginning you can probably have a chapter just talking about the main character’s background better by explaining his life a bit better. Like how is he a best friends with Morgan, a level seven citizen, but not be super rich or well provided being an orphan. Also he knows about some of the story but it was never said he was a reincarnate and it’s kinda obvious but still I think it’s better to say it then to never bring it up.
This is the best shadow slave fanfic ever. ..............................................................................................................
Empezamos mal desde que eliminaste a Sunny. Aún así lo leeré, pero ya que estoy le doy 1 estrella porque deduzco que la personalidad de todos los PJs serán cambiadas y destruidas para chuparle los pies a tu MC autoinsertado.
I'm going to hold my judgement, but this feels good even if you remove sunny So you get five stars