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Shadow Raven
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Anthony was just a common boy before the [Soul Spirit] arrived. But when it did...
His true Potential was unearthed, and no monster was safe from him...
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A good story, with great potential. Wait for it, this could be very very good. Just needs a bit of polish.
It's a good start to a book, since it has quite a bit if potential. The world and the characters are explained at least a bit at the start, so the reader has a general idea of what's going on. If the author keeps it up, it could become a really good book.
Good initial fight. Spear, javelins, lances, and the likes are my personal favorite. Tell us a bit more about what's going on in the world AROUND your character as well so that we can immerse! How did the world get like this? why is it so suddenly like a video game? Those are just examples, but I do think they are good questions lol You are doing well, and I am sure your other readers will agree,
As the author I can say that I will try to keep updating 4-5/Chapters a week, but I can´t promise that since writing is just a hobby of mine. Also, this is my first novel so don´t expect anything great, but I would appreciate it if you read it and gave me advice or just rate my novel. Thanks!