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Shadow Monarch in One Piece world
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We follow the journey of Ash, a man from Earth who is reincarnated as a child in the world of One Piece with the powers of the Shadow Monarch. Join him on his quest to dominate this world.
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voila se que je pense de mon histoire pour le moment: 3.2 étoile, 1 en qualité d'écriture, 2 en stabilité de mise a jour, 4 dvp de l'histoire, 5 en conception de caractère (eheh) et 4 en fond du monde car il s'agit d'une fanfiction et donc que le monde est forcement bien I hate a certain author who has a good writing talent but who keeps doing patreon ads, the guy is doing 1 chapter, 5 chapter where he says he is promoting on patreon, man I have really want to cut her throat. If you got to know who it is, tell me?
Great concept though. Good grammar with an interesting power. Why mc get poster wanted dead alive? For plot also why not make shadow slaves? I am probably going to drop this novel. MC ok ish while the chapter are a little to short for me. Author you shouldn't change the pov to much I could tell you are kinda struggling with that. Though that's up to you just do you since it's your book.
So I believe in chapter 10, we'd see Shadow Extraction now that Ash has finally interacted with Ashborn
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