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Sentient Core

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Penulis: Davion_blue001

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Waking up after dying mysteriously, Xadia is met with a new world has he awakens from his internal slumber. Awoken to a world occupied by humans and Siphons (People with abilities) and technological advancements.

Not long after he awakens from death, he discovers that he is possessing a siphon ability. With this discovery, Xadia strives to grow stronger and uncover the mysteries of his death. Can he survive this new world?

Imagine a futuristic world where cultivation is possible, where humans have evolved into super-powered beings, where anything is possible, magic and power, why imagine when you can have it all in one, check out Sentient Core.

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We will warm the Herd
And shake the stars.

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LazyErosage

Upon reading your content, I noticed that there are some grammar errors and the main character's name isn't sticking enough. While this may make it difficult for readers to fully immerse themselves in the story, it's important to remember that these things can be fixed with a little bit of editing and revision. My advice to you would be to go back through your content and carefully read each sentence to ensure that it makes sense and flows smoothly. You may also want to consider using tools such as Grammarly or Hemingway to help catch any errors you may have missed. Additionally, try to think about ways to make your main character's name more memorable, such as giving them a unique nickname or tying their name to a key aspect of their personality or backstory. Remember, writing is a process, and it takes time and effort to create a polished and engaging piece of content. Keep working at it, and don't be afraid to ask for feedback or seek out resources to help improve your skills. With dedication and perseverance, you can create a truly captivating story that will keep readers coming back for more.

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Jinx_Lee

Transmigration and Reincarnation story always caught my interest. I love this, keep up the good work! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Blessing_O

This is my first Sci-fi novel, and I love it. Still wondering what Xadia is though🤔 I like how the story is progressing and looking forward to his adventures as a hunter and the unmasking of his identity and ability 🤩

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Annabaibeauthor

Congratulations. As an author, I admire writers who write the SCFI genre. Hats off and looking forward to reading more from you. I know you are working on editing the novel in terms of grammar and am rooting for you. Cheers

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Little_feelings

Nice story but needs more editing.. ... .

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AMonarch

This novel is a true masterpiece that will leave a lasting impact on readers. The author's beautiful prose and richly drawn characters create a world that is both captivating and immersive.

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Sagittarius_Dev01

This is awesome 👍, keep it moving blud. I love how you make the characters interacts with themselves, it's like a fragment of yourself 😊. I LOVE THIS ❤❤❤

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