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I love you" doesn't always mean "I'll stay."
{February 13, 11:59 pm}
Lucas: It's all my fault. I'm so sorry. Remember that I will always love you my moonshine.
{Sunday, 6:00 am}
Erin: What are you speaking hon? Sorry, I fell asleep. Why didn't you come home?
Seen
Erin: Hon?
Seen
Erin: Why are you not replying?
Seen
Erin: Please say something. Is it due to work? Or something else?
Erin: I'll get back. I heard some loud noise outside the house. You better have replied and explained things when I'm back.
Seen
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During the night before Valentines', Luke Maygram sent a mysterious message to Erin Beverly. The next day the world turned upside down as a break out of zombies changed everything.
Left with the only text she got from her fiance and the mysterious 'seen' in her every message, she decided to look for him.
But will she able to make it and see Lucas again? when the world becomes a living hell?
Will love still conquers everything on end?
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Disclaimer: This story is pure fiction. All the names and places you might find similar are purely coincidental.
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A/N: This story is made by me, Lala_sanara, and my co-author and friend Ysaa.
We are still newbies in the world of everything. So every vote, comment, and review would greatly help us.
(Notice: This story will go to editing and some revision might occur too.)
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I just noticed that I was asked to review the other novel, HAPPY EVER AFTER, and not this one. Well, guess I'm doing both! The Good: The characters are solid with enough backstory that one can relate to them. The author has created a fairly interesting premise and kept it unique enough that it doesn't feel like every other apocalypse novel out there. The Bad: Grammar mistakes galore, but I feel like it is a result of translation so if I consider that then it isn't so bad. The story itself is great and well-paced, but I feel like it doesn't know what it wants to be. (It starts as a sad drama, then a happy romance, and then an apocalypse survival.) Suddenly saying "12 years later" really forces the readers to make a lot of assumptions. It would be nice to know how Lucas and Erin met again considering they escaped a plantation from somewhere when they were kids. The Neutral: While the plot is fairly entertaining, having us assume so much about the world, Emily, and Lucas makes it very easy for people to get the wrong idea about how certain events actually happened according to the author. I do understand that the author is not forcing the reader through the plot and that's good, but we still need a little guidance. The author should try to be careful with the timeline... the kids were ranging from the ages of 8-12 in Chapter 2 and Lucas was on the plantation for 5 years in chapter 4 so we assume he is 12 at the time of the escape. Strangely, the older kids never bothered trying to escape you said, so is Lucas the exception? The author struggles a bit with translating certain tenses, but I do see that those become less and less as I got further into the story. Keep it up and do not stop writing.
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After reading for a while, I observed that the author improved with his writings. It was difficult at first but you will get the hang of it in the future. With few edits and finishing touches, this will improve in terms of quality! I gotta say I'm inpressed with the author's growth! What a nice feeling of your brethren improving!
It touched me deep.It was very sad😭😭. Very brave of you to write about such a sensitive subject. Well done and keep going. It has potential dont give up.
Overall was a solid story, I would mention that some words are repeated and the descriptions are a little weak. Also more adjectives could be used in the story to draw the reader into the story more. World background so far is a little incomplete but it could just be that way for the mystery. Looks good overall, keep up the good work :)
After reading a couple of chapters of this book I consider you say that it has a good overall tone and the author really pays attention to the details and progression of the story. There's still some room for growth but so far from what I've seen it's looking good .
The story is quite intriguing and the progression is good. Writing quality seems to be getting better by the chapters and I find myself wanting to know more about the events that enfolds. Overall though, I'd advise author to keep up the pace and also edit the previous chapters as you progress
It is a really good story with interesting characters. While there are a few grammatical errors, the story itself managed to draw me in. Improving your grasp of the language comes with practice, but having a good story and concept aren't that easy. This story has the potential to become a great one. Keep up the good work.
Plenty of ideas on that book, and I honestly thing that there's room to develop them more. We want to live with the characters, fear and tremble with them, be happy with them. Those four chapters could be, in my opinion, at least 10. There's so much to say about it !
The style of writing is pretty good, neat and quite good written. Both leads are well described especially Erin as the female lead and they're really interesting characters. Great dark vibes I might say, author is really good at writing the dark part and the action scene as I found myself immersed on it. Story development has been good so far, the anticipation and guessing keeps me at the edge every time. The story line is also so easy to follow and will trap you with its cliff hangers. The bad: It could be personal. The switching from first person to third person and back is a bit annoying. There are some grammar errors here and there, but nothing that would obstruct the readers from following the story. Good cover and synopsis will bring you more readers, the cover is really good for me personally but the synopsis is not, I don't know on pc version but on mobile app the synopsis is a bit too messy. I mean I think the usage of --------- is so unnecessary. "I love you" doesn't always mean "I will stay" —February 13, 11:59pm. Well that's it. My first read of zombie romance and it's enjoyable reading experience. Good luck to you.
Really well done novel, with very great ideas and clear goal the author has in his minds. Just convert this great start into something amazing. Good luck!!
This novel is awesome! I have been already hooked up with the beginning of this novel. The plot is also exciting and entertaining. Can't wait for more chapters! I would recommend you to give this novel a try, it is definitely worth it! Good Job, Author.
This is a very emotional story. The characters are unique, and they behave like real people would, hence it's a realistic story. I have read another work from the same author, but I prefer this one. I feel that the author has done exceptionally well with this novel.
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This review is only after reading the first chapter. I personally don't like lionizing the main character by demonizing their guardian, but this story is better than Harry Potter in that respect. And for that reason I did not take off any points. But I do like the story and hope to read more soon.
The synopsis is extremely interesting. Captivating story from the beginning, cant wait for more uploads. Characters are relatable and I grew fond of them as the story developed. Well written and easy to read. Excellent novel, well done. [img=recommend]
Great story, please keep up a good work Author. Great Great Great Great Great... Wish u to achieve what ever you striving for. The potential is not limited:)
Wow, both a chilling start, and very sad, I am touched. The writing is good quality, and the overall story has a good element of suspense and intrigue that made me want to keep reading on. A few occasional grammatical errors but overall, a really good read! Nice work author!