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Story translated by google tratudor.
Sacred Gear Creator, is the first Sacred Gear created by God as a tool to make others, but no being in his universe could use his powers, so when he died a part of his power added to Sacred Gear in search of a Host.

I posted this fanfic on this other site and decided to see how to get out of here.
https://www.spiritfanfiction.com/historia/sacred-gear-creator-20411360
https://www.wattpad.com/story/240038941-sacred-gear-creator-pt-br

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jeanpierregerardo

I'm happy with the "yuri" tag. - But clarify something for me (you will change the whole story because if you put "yuri" you will have to change the protagonist to a woman xD). - If it were a "yuri" with the label "futanari" I approve it, if you read my review, please answer, in passing for others to read it too.

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John_sins1

The story i think is okay, but the english is seriously terrible, genders are completely wrong 90% of the time, the sentences are hard to understand and require you to reread them a few times to understand what is happening. I understand it is translated using google translate but seriously it is really poor. It is a shame because i think this could be a great fanfic if the english was better.

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mutekishifu

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jeanpierregerardo

interesing. *********************************************************************************************************************************************************

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SwordKing_Aren

Except from confusing words like nobility and etc. This is good story, I hope those remarks will fix and I don't have problem about Yuri tag as long it's not too much focus on them, I like how you changed Riser for the better which change the Elite 4 rising rookie Devil in the future chapter

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DILL_100

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jeanpierregerardo

si actualizaras seguido seria genial D. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................

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SCP_0999

Even though your writing needs improvement the story has potential. πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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Syed20

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Madara_Otsutsuki_

Another mc who own OP sacred gear but also want to be a dog of someone because he want to become a high ranking devil that's why he will join a peerage. what a waste 😩

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