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As the leaves of autumn painted the ground in hues of gold, a father and son drove along a road stretching far away from the city under a rainy sky. Their destination was a large, dilapidated house hidden deep within the forest, an inheritance passed down through their family. For now, this battered mansion was their best, if not only, option.
However, due to an unexpected work emergency, the father had to return to the city. Left alone in the grand house, Jack noticed a glimmer he had never seen before amidst the howling wind and the gentle patter of rain on one particular afternoon. Consumed by a sense of curiosity and mystery, Jack decided to follow the light. Unaware of what this sudden decision would bring.
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The start of the story is quite interesting. This author has a great imagination and presents the story in a stable way. I just hope the quality remains good and this is not dropped.
Great story easy to read. Great character development. I really enjoyed the world building and pace so far. I'm looking forward to more. [img=coins][img=exp]
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I love this novel so far and I just caught up after reading for 2 days now I'm so sad that I gotta wait for more chapters. I like the characters the background the system I like everything about it and can't wait to continue reading. I recommend this novel to everyone. Thank you Author for a great story I will continue to support.
I love this story and honestly wish there were more like it. This is the only second novel I wrote the reviews for. This novel is the better written and more believable. The character grew step by step and was able to overcome the challenges through trials and errors, and efforts rather than plot armour. The world stage setup is also good and within believable spectrum. In short, its a fantasy but no absurd. The language is good. The use of words shows that research on the type and descriptions were made. This is a good read.
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I like it!!! The only thing to see is that it is a legend. But I advise people to give it a chance! As the Chinese say. 不错 [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Writing Quality: 5/5 Stability of Updates: 5/5 Story Development: 5/5 Character Design: 4/5 World Background: 5/5 THESE ARE MY DEFINITIVE COMMENTS
Hello to all readers who decided to take a look at my comment. First of all, I read the book and I can say that I had a lot of fun. The jokes, the escapes, the fights were all quite good. I wrote this review more as a critic than as a friend and I can assure you that these are exactly what I had in mind.
I want to thank everyone who read the book. Just like the others, I tried to do my best when I wrote it. And this is my favorite among them. Explanation: -The book is currently being published in one volume, but I have big ideas for a sequel if there is a lot of interest from you. I also didn't want to make this volume unnecessarily long so as not to lose the originality of the story. Instead I wanted to end it at a logical place. Love ASW