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hello my friends I present too you a story I hope,will get the right people the motivation to start there own. are you tired of poseidon,Apollo and especially Hades i love them but they boring overused.

And everytime I try too find an hephaestus si it's always,subpar not finish or they don't know how,to write it so I decided too try my hand at it.

so I present an hephaestus si with a system let's so how this goes please advise.

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Chaimos

Thank me later 希腊神话:火与工匠之神 Is the right one 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😊😊😊😊

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Samuel812753

I love how you're going about it. I love the story so far. but question is he still gonna be with aphrodite, or do you have a better love interest in mind. Will he be exploring the volcano divinity he has in the myth cause it has a lot of potential since it includes lava, pressure, earth, fire, ash, smoke, and more. Anyways keep up the great work can't wait for more chapters hopefully the next chapter release doesn't take to long

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Dao_Of_Shamelessnz

mount tai= good no mount tai=no good if no mount tai = good then mount tai is =amazing mount tai very good Mc no see no mount tai only see mount tai with 12more chapters 🫴 🫴 = ppl of mount tai

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TheEvilDragon23

It’s new at the moment and I’ve only read the first few chapters. However, the idea is good and the story is going in a good direction. The author is currently releasing quite a few chapters not sure if the updates will be so often in the future, but I’m hopeful. The only problems I can see so far is mixing up words, grammar, pov. It isn’t to the point of being unreadable, but atleast I have to stop for a second to piece some parts together. If the author improves the grammar etc. this story would be five stars imo.

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Cevahir_Gezer

Did he create the string for shooting arrows out of nothing? If the divine power increases on its own over time, it is not possible for the Zeus crew to defeat the titans who are billions of years older than them. You cannot shoot arrows with that bow that does NOT have a string made of wood. Even if it has a string, the shots of a bow made by hand without any auxiliary tools will be inaccurate, and at the same time, the arrows made by hand will not be accurate. Since the center of gravity, density and shape of all of them will be different, the accuracy will be completely random. The bow made will be inaccurate, the arrows will be inaccurate, and since Hepastitus is neither the god of hunting nor the bow, he will be lucky if he can pin that arrow to the tree from 5 steps away. It is not possible to hit a butterfly flying in the air. Let's say, bow and arrow. It miraculously became of good quality with divine nonsense. Thanks to the same divine nonsense, it is amazing at using bow and arrow, you cannot shoot a butterfly and bury it in a tree with the tensile force of that bow made of ordinary trees. An arrow shot with the tensile force required to hit that butterfly will pierce through trees and rocks or arrow If we go back to the beginning, the bow does not have a string. If he can produce that string from nothing, it is ridiculous that he has to find trees to make a bow. In mythology, Hepastitus was born with one shoulder up and one shoulder down. His whole body is so ugly that it can be described as disgusting.

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