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All the Humans from Earth were suddenly transported into a new world called Celestial World. No one knew the reason why nor what the purpose was all about. They were suddenly transported without any warnings or signs and were forced to live in a mysterious and unfamiliar new world.
For 50 years, Humans lived in endless suffering and torment. They were all forced to run from one place to another or else they would be enslaved by other Foreign races that had long been living in the Celestial World.
Fortunately, the Human race was finally able to slowly develop its strength and power in the Celestial World through the sacrifice of countless Humans after 50 years. However, it was mysteriously Fated not to last long as an unknown power suddenly started doing everything to destroy Humanity's Kingdoms and Empires.
A young man by the name of Leo Heart had his Fate suddenly rewritten by some unknown power to stop this unprecedented doom of the Humans after a Red Cube, that the Heart Noble Household had been keeping as a Family Heirloom from the very start of the Human Race existence in the Celestial World, suddenly jumped up and embedded itself into his right palm.
A world full of Mystery in which Magic and Mana had become every race's foundation of existence. A young man who had lost his family for the Human Race's existence has his Fate unexpectedly rewritten after such an encounter.
But, would it be enough to stop this so-called unprecedented doom?
Would the Human Race's existence be saved by Leo from the unknown yet powerful existence?
Or would the Humans sadly become nothing but a mere history in this new world?
Note: The art of the book cover is not mine. All the credits go to its rightful owner...
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Sry, this story has a great premise and is very interesting I have enjoyed it so far however for me romance can make or break a story. His fiancee that killed his brother, ruined his city, tried to kill him etc is scum. She is made out so far to be the first real enemy of the mc. But now it's looking like it's gonna be one of them where she was "forced" to do it or some sht. Maybe to protect the mc from something else. Ending with her getting with the mc, in the end, all is forgiven. I can't stand this tbh... It completely ruins it for me. A female enemy that ends up with the mc. Look's like it will be one of them books... Now a couple of things that are annoying to me as well. She randomly out of nowhere just invites herself in to live with him. He says nothing at all and allows it. Okay, I can ignore this. Then she schemes against the mc getting others to atk him. When he then slapped and spat at her afterwards this made me very excited and looking forward to the future as I thought this will be unique. Something different giving me hope for the book. Now she invites herself onto his fraction by showing the mc a letter that he has to protect her? Then the mc says nothing and lets her join gaining all the benefits and letting his ENEMY on his secret on how he is breaking the rules with a loophole. WTF. This makes absolutely no sense, let's ignore the idiotic thing of letting her in on his secret but I'm sorry she needs protection from the mc? How shtty is this excuse? Isn't she the student rep? She is meant to be stronger than the mc (if he doesn't use his trump card) Plus how will she be in danger at SCHOOL. She will be surrounded by her fans helping her etc... The mc has just lost all of the backbone he had shown earlier, losing all respect I had for him. Every time it's played off with how he will make her "pay" later and how he has all these "plans" for her. I don't give a flying fck what he plans. Were here in the here and now. Great you have plans. That doesn't mean you have to let her completely roll over you all the time until you can eventually in the far future execute them. Plus he has the backing of a power equal to empires what is a tiny family from a kingdom gonna do? Yeah, gl to the author. Not for me
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet these hands will never tap anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works!
I have been writing RME for 7 months straight now. From the very first chapter until the very latest (Chapter 357). I've encountered lots of lots of different readers, specifically troll, demanding in terms of grammar, sensitive readers who immediately drop the story just because I argued with them, Kiss-my-ass-author-and-I'll-read-your-novel type of reader, and of course there are also a lot of good ones such as patience in terms of story in terms of story, plot, and character development, has a good reading comprehension, corrects me when I'm wrong, suggested me a much better word to use, active and loyal as always from day one till now (You know who you are), those fun ones, those who knows how to ask first before assuming things immediately (which is partly good or bad, depending on what kind of assumptions they thought), and lastly, the most important ones, those who spend money (What? You think this is not good? HAHAHAHA, well, it is indeed, a bit at least, but who doesn't love money here? Anyone? Someone?) I've also encountered lots of lots of difficulties and challenges when writing RME, including Author's Block (Well, every author has experienced this), Self-doubt, Reader Pressure (even when their aren't any, you still get pressured everytime you think that you should write something really good because you have 400+ readers who is paying to read and more that used fast pass or is still in the free chapters), Lack experience (I'm just a new Author with 7 to 8 months experience in writing novels), Lack of Time (How I wish that there would be 48 hours in a day), Lack of Good Content, and many more... Not to make this review long, let's immediately go to the main topic, which is about RME. Additional tags of RME: HAREM and WEAK-TO-STRONG This are(were) the questions I've encountered so far in RME and the questions I've thought: Q: Is RME good? A: Yes! Q: Is RME interesting? A: Yes! Q: Is RME worth reading? A: Yes! Q: Is RME really worth the FastPass and Coins I spent or will be spending? A: A warm and big welcoming YESSS!! Q: Is the Author of RME shameless? A: I'm proud to be shameless! Q: Does the Grammar of RME improves? A: Yes! Chapter 1 to 100 will have plenty of Grammar issues because that was the time when I'm still extremely/absolutely/ultimately new to writing. But, the moment you enter chapter 101 and onwards, you will notice lots of lots of improvements in grammar. Actually, even in the chapter 1 to 100 you will notice that I'm improving. Q: Do you have plans to fix those grammar issues in chapter 1 to 100, or even those few issues in the chapter 101 and onwards? A: No! I've thought about that for so long, and I have decided in the end not to (A few kind and good hearted readers also asked me this. Sorry for that one I've mistaken as a troll, hehehe...) Why? Because this is my first novel, and I thought that it's much better for me not to correct my mistakes here so that when I start writing my 2nd novel I will be able to clearly see my improvements so far (You will also be able to see how much I've improved as well). Q: Is this a Harem? A: Yes! With ROMANCE, and A PURPOSE for why their is a need for a HAREM! Q: Why did you not kill Elizabeth and let the MC keep her as one of her women? A: If you keep on reading till the end of volume 1, you'll know the answer (Not gonna reveal it because not everyone likes spoiler) Q: Why is the development slow? A: One reason is because I suck at writing during the times of chapter 1 to 100, so it ended up with the story development becoming slow (I've fixed that already in the chapter 101 and onwards). Two, this is a THRILLING and MYSTERY, so expect it to have a somewhat slow development. Lastly, it's because I'm writing the present, past, and future at the same time, since the early parts of RME there were still a lot of lacking information (Those lack of informations is part of the catch of RME, because as you keep on reading you will be able to slowly learn more) Q: Is the MC overpowered A: Yes, extremely overpowered. Actually, being overpowered has no limits. However, not in the early parts of the story, because just like what I've mentioned prior to reading this part, RME is a Weak-to-Strong type of novel Q: What can I expect in RME? A: First and foremost, DON'T EXPECT ANYTHING, because you'll only end up disappointed when I unfortunately/accidentally/carelessly not satisfy your expectations. Lastly, just read, please, I don't really know how to answer this question, because even I don't know what to expect in RME, so how do you expect me to answer something that I don't even have a clue about? Q: I mean, what should I expect in the existing chapters of RME? A: Oh, so that's what you meant about... So, what you should expect is... First volume, lots of grammar errors, needs more information, story building need improvements, lots of questionable parts. In short, it has a HUGE room for improvements, that I really should fix but still decided, NO! Second volume, slowly improves in grammar, information slowly being cleared out, story building improved, questions are being answered, interesting developments, more adventures, more characters, as in there is more. In short, this is the part when everything about RME finally getting good. Lastly, for Volume 3, it's still the first chapter of the 3rd volume, so I still won't be able to say what you should expect. Last question: What is M_W? A: M_W is actually a growing team of people that I have founded (M_W Cancer). M_W Cancer, which is me, is the Writer/Author/Chief Editor. M_W Nomral is the Grammar Checker/ Assitant Editor (Just like me, he's new to writing novels, so in chapter 1 to chapter 100 you will find that despite having Grammar Checker there still exist lots of lots of grammatical errors. No worries though, he has already improved and is improving more). M_W FrostCode is the artist of RME, in-charged of the upcoming new book cover for RME. (He's actually just a highschool kid, so please be kind to him. Good in drawing, but he still has a lot of room to grow) Lastly, M_W Miss Fierce is the Proofreader of RME (She's a new member and just like me, she's also new to writing novels, so she's in the process of developing to become a good Proofreader, just like everyone else in the team). Wait, let me ask you one more question before ending: If M_W is a team, then are you recruiting people or is it just a bunch of friends who you accept to be part of your growing team? A: Good question, you can actually apply to be a part of M_W, that is if you have the necessary qualifications. First of all, at this moment we only accept Writers and Artist. So, to join as a writer, you first need to have a story of your own that has more than 50,000 words, has the capability to update daily, active in the team, willing to grow, can follow rules, regulations, and our Hierarchy system, shoud be friendly, needs to have the principles of being an Author/Writer, is a hardworking person, and should be above 16 years old. To join as an Artist, you need to show your own portfolio online of your OWN drawings or arts. That's pretty much everything, because our Artist is only payed accordingly to the market price or the worth of the artwork. If you have more questions, just reply down below and I'll answer them when I have the time. I'll release a new update of the review once RME reached 1 year. HAVE A HAPPY READING EVERYONE!
Found a Hidden Gem, really like this novel and im hoping you don't drop this. And if you keep on trying everyone will start to notice your work, so don't give up too soon my man!!! Alright Cheers to you my guy or girl idk :3
The novel releases an update every day around 10pm - 12pm (+8 GMT). I will release 2 chapters a day which would have around 1.5k-2k words per chapters, which is around 3k-3.5k words a day. Their is no problem with the daily release since this novel already has 122 chaps (as of now). Thank you for reading and please keep on reading, hahaha! ~M_W Cancer
I am a big fan of the concept of Elementals. From the title and the synopsis I got attracted by it and started reading the chapters. The story really impresses me much. It exceeded my expectations. Every chapter never fails to bring interesting plot and development. The flow of every chapter is consistent. Keep it up Author !!
hello mr. author, goodluck on your journey as you write this novel, i'm sorry if i can't be a part of your novel. it's just i find HAREMS unbearable. i can only give you my power stones and my 5 star review to support you my fellow kababayan, goodluck and FIGHTING!!!
hmmm.. a good novel. unfortunately the mc's character is not to my taste. It says he's smart, but, bringing along an unconscious missing beautiful princess of a powerful raging race on the side of the road because she has some bruises and is unconscious? he knows that she is trouble, he knows that he is endangering his and his company's lives, yet he still brings her. truly it cancels the smart mc tag. so I'm just gonna give it 4 stars, -1 ⭐ for the lack of warning
I gave 3 stars to everything other than writing for a simple reason: I couldn't finish chapter 1. Why, you may ask? The grammar is absolutely horroble. Out of around 30 paragraphs I read, at least 20 had one grammatical error, and some even had more. I am in no way a know-all, since english is actually my second language, but it still feels horrible to read something with such a grammar. I am sorry author that I didn't give you a chance, but if you ever update the old chapters to improve the grammar I will definetly try again.
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this novel could have been so much better if the plots were less cliche, I've read 270+ plus chapters and the conversations between the main characters and his women are the most annoying, there's never any substance to it. 270+ chapters and he's still a 1 star mage if it takes him 200 chapters to move a star the what's the point of the novel. they're so many things that happen which in my opinion are unnecessary and keep him side tracked from his main focus of becoming stronger. Some plots are actually intersesting, like his him being part of a mysterious organisation and the leaders favourite , his brother still being alive , him having elementals etc. infact him having multiple women wouldn't be a problem but it's the cliche troupe of his women being able to push him around a bit that becomes annoying. in the middle of a war that involves different countries your women are fighting amongst them selves and when you correct them they get mad at you and start throwing people your way and then you have to run away, like what sort of nonsense is that supposed to be, as a reader that war became useless and unimportant after that because the seriousness of the situation got downplayed a whole lot by people who should be taking it the most serious. Like I said the interaction between the MC and other characters is very lack luster so reading dialogues can make you cringe. as someone who's read over 100+ books with similar elements to this I can say that this book although the concept is great, the underwhelming fight scenes, lazy magic spell names and magic concepts and irrelevant sub plots make it a chore to read. the MC goal is to be come strong but 270+ chaps in and MC has only gotten to 1 star? the .when will he catch up to other people that are already at 5 stars? the only thing he has for him is he wits and smarts. what's the point of leading the war? why couldn't the war scene come when he was stronger, in most great novels like these MCs breakthrough during war arcs and grow stronger nut the war arc has no relevance to him personally besides experience. he's not even getting stronger from it. this novel just needs more plot that's relevant to the MCs growth as a mage, he's supposed to be ruthless a d strong but his interaction with the female characters make him look like a wuss especially after he finds that Elizabeth is not his enemy.
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I am no pro, so no need to take my words seriously. the story progress is slow, not that slow but it's slow so keeping a steady read from the beginning is really hard. overall, the story is good and the development is also good, it's a good novel but with slow progress. Perfect for those who likes to read novel which has everything explained in detail. it's a good novel, though the slow progress can be you know... still, it's a good novel you should try it.
just endure for like 100 chapters..... After that mc becomes mature and writing style of author also improves as the novel progress....... at the start you will fill like this story is written by some kid but eventually it will get better.... so give it a chance.....
A good novel and i hope i can read it more... Please don't drop this novel like your first novel and keep up your good work.........................................................................
I came back here for 2 year of lost and I have read your novel. First thing I read after installing it.and I want to have membership just to read all chapters. Please keep it up I'm reading your other novel.too. All I'm saying is I fell in love reading again. Thanks to you
Currently at chapter 101, and it's looking good at this point. I just hope I won't have to drop this as I've done for countless books that had a good start but the middle part sucks.
I really like this novel! I don't have much to say other than good job to the author! Its also a bonus 100 is not locked haha Def. recommend to read!
just started reading this one but the mixed tenses in the sentences are really of putting. I'm sticking with it for now, but if the writing quality doesn't improve, I'm done.
I really like the novel 😊💕, it allows me to explore my imaginations to some certain level or extent, though am not a kid, but little wild imaginations won't hurt right 😊☺. Love ❤ the characters (💪LEO) and the rest. Love how the writer adds new characters to the novel and how the writer makes new plots very interesting 😁☺. But TO THE WRITER:- You have little problems with your spellings and sentences some times, but still great with exploiting your vocabularies 💪. The major problem am having is the "OVER EXPLANTIONS" the writer makes when explaining certian things like kingdoms, cities even villages and towns, and even still "OVER EXPLAINING" something or someone that has already been explained. Sometimes even "OVER EXPLAINING" people who are sometimes not really relevant in the novel, making we the readers tired to some extent and sometimes skipping the non important information and sometimes makes the novel a bit bulky. Try reducing the "OVER EXPLAINING" problem. It most times covers more parts of a chapter or episode 😩. But never the less I love the novel ❤❤❤❤💕💪. Kudos!!! Keep up the good work🙏.
Just started reading the book about 10 days ago already up to the current chapter. grammer gets better i honestly dont care about grammer that much since ive read some novels through google translate (let me tell you gives you appreciation for it) really enjoy the novel and think it hass a lot of potential. I will definitely support the novel until its finished think its funny how im bumber 6 on supporter list but only started about 10days ago haha keep up the good work dont let people pressure you, youve done a good job just keep it goong not every chapter is going to the most amazing just like not everyday of our lives is exciting!