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Reverend Insanity - Otherworldly disaster
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A fan of reverend insanity is transmigrated to the gu world 50 years before Fang Yuan's first regression but fortunately, the transmigrator was granted a lot of unfair cheats that would make people cry from greed and kill from anger but will that be enough to survive and accomplish his goals? would he survive against other participants?
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Author's note: I'm a new author and just write for fun this fanfic will most likely have a ton of grammatical errors and plot holes but I will try to fix them and advance the plot. Critics are always welcome but I will most likely not fix grammatical errors I also accept suggestions I'll make sure to implement them.
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cliched shit. even novice authors know this and try to avoid this shit. It's like you're a person who read a novel for the first time in your life and it was Reverend Insanity and you started writing dropping your shit
Author here shamelessly reviewing his own work I'm a beginner so feel free to give constructive criticism. Also, I'll take suggestions especially which and how many characters should die. I have to admit my intrusive thoughts won on the outline.