Retrying as a Villain Until I Get Things Right

LV 1

Malakai_Darkstar

This story is a captivating and intriguing tale that follows the journey of Braxis and his messed-up family. The author has skillfully crafted a plot that keeps the reader on the edge of their seat, eagerly waiting to see what happens next. The characters are well-developed and their interactions are both believable and engaging. The author's use of vivid descriptions and immersive language allows the reader to visualize the story's setting and feel the emotions of the characters. Overall, this story is a fantastic read that is sure to keep readers hooked until the very end.

LV 14

WriterTheos

When I say there aren't many novels that are as good as this I mean it! The grammar was flawless, the descriptions were perfect not too long or short. The characters were great and the story was also fire. Definitely a future prominent author, keep going!

LV 2

Randall_Polliard

This is a novel that masterfully intertwines themes of family dynamics, sibling rivalry, and unrequited love in a fantastical setting. The author has a knack for creating vivid, atmospheric scenes that transport the reader into the world of the characters. The story showcases a wide range of emotions and interactions between the characters, from the palpable tension between Gravis and his sons to the tender moments between Braxis and Juliane. The familial relationships are complicated, and the author does an excellent job of conveying the complexities without overwhelming the reader. The protagonist, Braxis, is an intriguing character who struggles with his own desires and the expectations of his family. This internal conflict adds depth to his character, making him relatable and compelling. His journey of self-discovery is beautifully depicted, and readers will find themselves rooting for him despite his flaws and occasional missteps. The romantic subplots in the novel provide a fascinating backdrop to the main storyline, and they are well-developed and believable. The author skillfully weaves in elements of tension and desire, making the relationships feel authentic and engaging. The fantastical elements of the story, such as the use of gravity magic, add an extra layer of intrigue and excitement. The author's world-building is exceptional, and readers will be enthralled by the richly detailed universe they've created. Retrying as a villain is a captivating read that will delight fans of fantasy and romance alike. The combination of relatable characters, a compelling storyline, and a well-crafted, imaginative world make this book a must-read for anyone seeking an immersive and engaging reading experience.

LV 3

Sage_of_Anarchy

The story's readability is on par with some top-earning novels out there. Not only does it flow from event to event with perfection but it also has the potential of being turned into a top novel in the future. I have nothing but compliments for the author.

LV 14

Salad_Adressing

I think that I'm writing this pretty well so far :) Please leave comments or suggestions on things you would like to see! Enjoy the story that I've been putting a lot of effort into!

LV 3

Sin_Theta_San

The story is good and I really liked 'return by death' concept of the protagonist, it was a fresh and easy read and the author done it without much grammar mistakes. The world background explained in the first chapter is is entertaining. I want to see how the author takes the mc 👍

LV 1

Spaghetti_Queen

I really really like this story, reminds me of an anime the way i can envision everything, keep up the hard work author! i’ll keep reading in return :). Oh and add some cute little monster guys too if you can, I love them a lot haha

LV 3

RasyaHelion

The protagonist is so relatable, although the dialogue is a tad a bit too silly in my opinion. A good concept overall, and the story is very much fast-paced.