Bab 9: Pointers From The Author
Hello! As I said last week no chapter. Sorry bout that.
"You could have made a chapter from the time you did this one."
No I can't. I made this in one sitting and barely 40 minutes. While writing a 1500 word chapter takes atleast 3-4 hours.
"What about the chapter for next week?"
Yeah gotta have to skip that too... Today is March 18, Sunday. The following days, 19 to 23, is the week before the midterm exams, which is 26 and 27.
Now that I think about it. I may be able to make a chapter next week.
Now then, let's start the pointers.
1. Wishes.
Just to make it clear, MC is a teenager, of course he makes naive decisions.
I may be smart but I can't be that smart.
2. Dropping The Story.
Honestly, I don't care if you drop the story. I may reply but that's it.
"But replying makes it that you actually care!"
Let's make an analogy. Entering the story is equivalent to entering my house, everyone is welcomed!
The contents itself is like my cooking. You're free to consume the food I made.
Of course I would be mad if they said "I'm leaving" or "Your food is shit"
You made yourself welcome, don't complain if you dislike something.
Though I would be happy if you tell me what I can improve.
3. Changing The Story
I can change the story a bit. Rude requests aren't welcomed but polite ones are.
Especially that one guy who was very polite. So I made a change, make Gorou and Miki address each other with Otou-san and Okaa-san less.
All I want to Constructive Criticism not destructive criticism
Suggestions are welcomed. Requests are noticed, polite requests especially.
4. The Item System
Do you guys know the item systems in moba games? Yeah you guys know about it.
I'm thinking of incorporating the items. Right now, MC could contend for Top Three Digits. I repeat, Three Digits.
If I add the item system, he could instantly go to Top Two Digits.
Do you guys know what Argus' original weapon? Its called Fleeting Time. As the name suggests, its a catalyst for controlling time. Well, not yet cuz the only thing it could do is speed things up. Yeah, in game, its CD reduction.
Though because Fleeting Time was shattered into pieces maybe it could only give CD Reduction.
So, should I add the item system or not? MC is already strong. I don't want him to be super strong. That will be too boring. And there's other factors that can make him strong. Like his bloodline. Oops spoilers.
5. Comments
Though I used to, I no longer check every comment. But yeah, I'll do my best to read every comment.
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