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Sebastian Alexander traveled to the world of Highschool of the Dead.
For this world doomed to Evil, Sebastian expressed great fear.
Fortunately, he activated the Red Alert System.
Under the powerful unit of the System, Sebastian quickly gained a foothold and even started the pace of conquering another world.
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This is an unofficial translation. I also edit the story to remove all the nationalism, so that you won't see anything like: 'Certain country' No.1 or 'Certain country' is inferior.
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Tulis ulasanThe story was so-so, honestly, I expected more. It’s supposed to be the world of HOTD, but its characters are simply forgotten or NPCs without much dialogue or personality. Some aren’t even mentioned, they're just referred to as "Takagi and the others," or they're not mentioned at all. This story works more as a simple survival story in an apocalypse, and that's it. Remove the HOTD factor and it would be the same: a cold and ruthless MC who becomes the strongest very early in the story, and the rest is just about how he unlocks things from his system and collects resources. There's not even something fun like a harem or comedy, so that's my honest critique.
Membuka SPOILERThe choice of Red alert units make it a very interesting addition to the story and I am anticipating the way it goes, the only thing that I don't see the reason for is why start in HOTD if you aren't going to use any of the characters there, the execution is not bad is just there's a lot of lost potential here, as it stands it could be any other zombie story and it wouldn't make it any different.
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$0viet anthem plays this is not *my* favourite novel it is OUR favourite novel so join comrade-in-arms as we convert this world into the socialist workers paradise *soviet March plays as outro*
I tried to give this another shot but it gets worse in my eyes. the MC has zero personality. there is zero character growth. he doesn't have hobbies. he doesn't have likes. all he wants is to be the the ruler but that also gives him zero joy. he's never expeesses any amount of emotion, I believe he's just a powerful robot. has he laughed? what entertains him? or is just getting stronger supposed to be it? lol thats the whole this story? stronger and stronger, conquer but never actually live. you're missing every detail to make him relatable. Im pretty sure the author was bullied so this is how his mc turned out. some bum who can't have friends and has to force them to like him, subserviently. lol I get it, but it gets better buddy. start with writing an actually human instead of this dumb*ss robot you call an MC. like every other character is just forgotten. there's no substance. I like red alert too but thats about the only thing you did right in this story.
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too slow but I like this story translator doing good edit those dirty chinese racist china nambawannn .
The story and the idea is good. My only complaint would be the sometimes wonky grammar.
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one of the best red alert fanfiction out here in webnovel. the MC character is well like as a tough no nonsense. but the update is kinda slow so looking forward to chapters daily. 😁😁
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Por el momento es una historia interesante. Aunque siento que el autor está desperdiciando completamente el mundo y los personajes de HOTD ya que apenas se hace mención a ellos y no hay nada lascivo en la historia. Creo firmemente que un fanfiction de HOTD sin harem y R18 es como una historia de dragón ball z sin los Saiyajin.