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reborn with the memory of olivier queen reborn in harry potter(hiatus)
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Somebody asks a god for Olivier's Queen memories in the world of Harry-Potter, will his bow allow him to save the people close to him or will he use it as a weapon?
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a well written story and an intruiguing concept for the idea behind it, people often dont give enough importance to the physical aspect of magic, wether it be for dueling or as a vessel to hold more magic, and combining it with G.Arrow is interesting to say the least, i look forward to the future updates, good work author
story is not orderly, one minute author writing a next minute x. wish awful but that is free will people can wish what ever. as long as he born magical not so different for mc? I dont know. he wants au he gets au. names is written wrong or not care one minute author explain au next is not. we still dont know timeline, why boy who lived in this case girl who lived if there is no voldemort? there is story but we readers dont know despite 11 years. there is no mention regulus horcrux-locket. there is no mention development in vigilante, how shorty did solves cases, we just know he just did? that is it. full chaotic, full of mistakes or lack of effort to explain differences, unorginal story-tonks got crying in train, stone in castle in first year. only different all other stories I read trevor the frog is dead-malfoy married muggle with have a child-girl with ridicilous name? I hope you can edit a lot then publish otherwise this story gonna be a lot worse.
Bro did you write this while sleep deprived? Every other sentence feels like an incomplete thought. The concept of an au experience seems cool but it is incredibly hard to understand what is going on, and after every chapter the mc is starting to feel more and more like a Gary Stu.
Just by the wish of an archer's skill in a world with magic I know this story will be an anbolute monstruosity... Dude, out of all wishes you can have for a world where you need either magic skills , magic knowledge, runes or magic items you choose to be able to have good accuracy with bows, daggers and maybe human weapons ? Is that all the extent of the MC's wisdom?