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Reborn in the Shinobi World as a Sarutobi
3.94 (62 peringkat)
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Mc is reincarnated on Naruto has a member of the Sarutobi clan world with some perks.
The picture fan art belongs to Green Tea.
was the only most handsome Asuma when searching for pictures for this fanfic light novel.
This is a Fanfiction and I don't own any of the characters from Naruto, or MHA except for the Mc and others I may add.
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umm first of all the grammar is just bad i cant read it past ch3 even if im curious about your story... sorry there... hopefully you can use gramerly or other grammar checker before you post it here or update it later on.. please... because i think the premise for this story is good please tell me if it become better and what ch it start from?
Im not a writer and English is my second language but i have to say that this novel was imposible to read with the amount of typos and grammatical errors. I thought that after a few chapters the author would stop writing the same typo over and over again and again after a lot of people mentioned it in the comments but he didn’t correct the typos or stopped writing them (the typo is “has” instead of “as”).
Pole please comment I would like to get involved with my readers to see where I can take this story. I am no expert on Naruto story but i know at least the main story line. I'll like to share ideas with you guys. So please do comment on the latest chapters.
helping lots of canon/non canon char stronger around mc is annoying for me -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
awesome I love it please post more chapters.🙏hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhj qjnckwc wokdjc cojwknckjmw ckmc owejkc kweojcmowe o
This story seemed to be great at first but ! The writting quality is barely acceptable and more than anything the story lacks personality. The MC has no depth, no originality and is too OP in the sense that his OP pop out of nowhere and seems to be contagious, spreading everywhere. The stoty background is that of Naruto World but it is too superficial and lacks in depth research on the subject. In all it is a 2D textbook fanfic in which the reader cannot immerse themselves into. Despite the fact that the original idee was good.
The story is interesting, but there is a lack of research. For example, Hayate is four years younger than Asuma, but the writer made them the same age. Gender-bending, I can't even comprehend my hatred for it. The idea of having Sharingan abilities without the Sharingan is genius, and I applaud him/her for it! Finally, detest how the mc spent a lot of time on other characters rather than growing stronger himself. Overall, good concept, but with a poor application? Not my cup of tea, though others might like it. I suggest re-engineering the fic.
author ruined it all by saying he is the son of Danzo. WTF this story had a great potential but that one line ruined it for me. i hate danzo the most.
Membuka SPOILER
Falta desarrollo en las relaciones de los personajes entiendo que es un Shounen pero tienes que desarrollarla, no solamente tienes que centrarte en darle poder también falta estabilidad mental y un poco más de crueldad le diste al bien asuma una prometida pues ahora lleva su relación como compañeros de vida y muerte pero como pareja y además mete a aduma en la guerra y que cause un revuelo como la hazaña de Minato o el tercer raikage
Membuka SPOILER
Orochi is not bad or at least worse than tobirama who invented the technique, I just feel that he was frustrated by what made him hiruzen in his investigations and the defeat by itachi that made him seek the sharingan for god they are a ninja village and they are scared by human experiments.
Looks like a promising beginning...... Just wondering where the future may take it. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
the grammar is horrible and I don't like the changes made to the naruto verse but past the grammar this story is a 3.7. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
One of the best Fan-Fics that I’ve read so far, great quality of writing, in depth action/battle/in general fighting scenes. Overall the thing that really made me enjoy this story would have to be the NON-harem,thank you, just thank you so much, for not being an insanely perverted author!!!
Character gets reincarnated into the body of asuma but instead of making his own path, he seems to be choosing to following the path of the original asuma. So if you like a happy im going to teach everyone my new techniques type of character then this is for you
God damn the English sucks. Like it's really bad. I can't express it enough. It's comical at times how painful it is reading broken English. In addition, the autocorrect is awful as well. It's fucks up so many words and makes the verbiage absolutely horrible. Once past the broken English, however, the story is actually of great quality. The characters are great and it is a very interesting and different take on the Naruto world. It was kind of disappointing that Might Guy was changed into a girl but oh well. If you could get an editor or try to improve your English by actually proof reading what you upload, it would be so much better. Thanks for the great story!
at first I thought it was MTL because of bad english.....BUT then I found out the author was suffering from deficiency of grammar
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This could have been way better if the author spent time fixing the spelling and grammar a little. Even using normal Microsoft word would have done a lot of good. Stopped reading after 15 chapter as the story went too fast, made no sense, the character went too OP and seriously could not ignore misspelled words.
This is a really interesting perspective, a unique fan-fic if should say it a word. The MC's talent in fuinjutsu is at the level of savant, which I would say is illogical considering he is no uzumaki. Other wise its good please don't drop the novel
This story has promise but it has a ton of stuff that irritates me. First of all the vocabulary of some of the characters doesn't make sense. The Hokage is using the word totally in his vocabulary as if he is an ignorant high schooler rather than a highly learned leader of a village that is nicknamed "The Professor". I love Op Mc's which this mc is but I hate Mc's who think that they can take other characters and make them Op just because he trained them. That's not how it works. The mc has cheats that give him a huge advantage so it makes sense his speed of advancement but at age 6 all his friends can beat chuunin and have mid chuunin level chakra is ridiculous. The author also doesn't really realize how chakra intensive some techniques are. 7-8 years old can not use A or even B rank Jutsu. Kage bunshin no jutsu is restricted to jonin level ninjas because of many reasons. One is that an average jonin with a jonin level chakra and control can only use it to make 3-4 Kage bunshins and that's it. An 8-year-old kid with a chuunin level chakra and control can summon 7-8 Kage bunshins to do his moonlight style Kenjutsu. Another thing that annoys me is that the author confuses kenjutsu with taijutsu and it irritates me a lot. There are other things that irritate me but I don't want to write more.