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I wake up to find that I've reincarnated in Naruto's body.
The only problem, I have no cheats no system no anything.
I have to actually work to get stronger and survive in the dangerous world of Naruto.
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Tulis ulasanI'll give 3 star first. After i read that he can only do 8 clones i stopped reading it cause i can see it already hes gonna nerf him so bad and after i looked at comment he justified it that kakashi said he can only use 8 clones and he used many clones by defeating mizuki cause he angry lol. Correct me if i am wrong i didnt know he can only use 8 thats BS. Well im just honest here why make him remember the past if only ur gonna nerf him its gonna lame and not saying make him OP so much im just baffled he nerfed the only thing that naruto is good at lol.
Membuka SPOILERThe author should have just made an OC if he was just going to nerf cannon Naruto into the ground. Author is also a slave to canon dropped don't waist time.
this review is made as I done read Ch 11 writing quality is better than most, with little to none misspelling. for story it's still hovering around canon. for character mostly author show a little about other and focus on mc that show a blend of naruto and mc, with a little of naruto nature shown. personally I think this story in beginning phase and still to early to judge, but the nerfing of naruto ability sit badly on my book.
The story is basically naruto if he was a talented civilian as the entire purpose of anyone ever being naruto is his chakra and now he barely has more than sasuke I believe an oc would have been better than completely taking away naruto's only defining detail as a charecter.
Not worth the read lol nerfed mc and the mc is a full blown moron. He writes down all of the events and anything important and the mc shouod have never done that but since he did do it then he shouldve destroyed it immediately lol but he doesnt..... also why did you nerf the mc? Waste if time reading
AUTHOR ABANDONED THIS GREAT STORY I AM OUT! ..................................................................................... .....................................................................................
Why in the world did you choose Naruto to self insert into if you didn't want to become op too fast. Naruto's main strength is his unbelievably massive chakra reserves. With metaknowledge that's all one needs to become an overpowered existence unless he is a moron. I think Sasuke would have been more fitting for a self insert with his limited chakra reserves compared to Naruto.
Untuk ulasannya, Kakashi harusnya lebih peka terhadap perubahan karakter Naruto. Walaupun dia terlihat malas dan terlambat, Kakashi tetap Jonin dan mantan Anbu. Perubahan karakter Naruto khususnya di misi Gelombang membuat dia faham bahwa Naruto telah berubah. Aku akan jujur cerita ini sangat menarik, baik karakter dan pengembangan cerita nya bisa dikembangkan lebih baik. Semoga penulis melanjutkannya suatu saat nanti 🙏
This has got to be by far the worst thing I have ever read.............................................................................................
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I need more more more more and more Naruto without a system , amazing though I really like system stories this is sooooooooooooooooo gggggoooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddd aaaaaammmmmmaaaaazzzzziiinnngggg
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author I understand you, but this is bad for your future writing, you know? is that you’ll always find something you don’t like in your works, but if you start rewriting every time, you’ll never finish any
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Hi, I'm the author so of course, I gave myself a 5 star. I hope you enjoy the story. If you find anything wrong with the grammar or have any suggestions for the story please leave a comment.