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Re:born with immortality in mcu universe
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John a sick child that has been in the hospital for his whole life has been in bed waiting for his time to run out. The only thing he did was read some comics of spider-man and some animations. That have made him what to be like him only to come to reality and fear that he would die before he can read more Spider-Man comic
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I like it making some one immortal and fully immortal is something I was looking for and so far it's not bad so plz give the more!!!!!!!!!!!
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I read 1 chapter Decent start but some real issues 1 no memory of past life means no future knowledge, no knowledge of spiderman as well 2 is it just spiderman and his villains or other marvel characters 3 if other characters why not change it to make it based of the MCU films, and not comics. This way it makes it easier for your writing, and the mcu isn't so overwhelming that he could die walking down the street 4 if you re wrote it based on mcu films could make it he goes to school with Peter, he builds the defenders before the avengers. He makes a fortune with investments from money stolen and laundered from gangsters. He invests fortune rescuing people from New York before avengers. He stops Ultron being born, could make him antihero, not hesitating killing villains early on 5 immortality is great in theory but in actuality it sucks, better to give him a major healing factor. If he knows he cant die he would have no fear, if he knows he cant die he wouldn't try 6 even if immortal he can still be make