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Primordial Vampire God System

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UPDATE: I WILL START THIS ONCE MY OTHER BOOK, SHGS (SUPREME HAREM GOD SYSTEM) ENDS SINCE BOTH BOOKS HAVE THE SAME WORLD AND I DO NOT WANT CLASHES.
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"Have you heard about the rumour?"

"What rumour?"

"They say that there's a Vampire on the loose, he's out there killing humans mercilessly"

"Hahahaha! That's the funniest joke I ever heard! Vampires? Those Slaves? Hahaha!"

"Yeah, I feel the same! I think someone just started this rumour as a joke! Hahaha! How can those weaklings kill us, humans?"

"True True…"

In a bar, two middle-aged men talked and laughed as they discussed the recent rumour they heard.

Seeing those two, a drunk old man shook his head as he sighed.

"Ignorance is bliss indeed…"

"These younglings do not know what the real fear is…
The vampires may have fallen… but my old bones still remember the days when they were in their prime…"

The old man sobered up in an instant and his body shuddered in fear as the memories of the long-forgotten horror appeared in his mind.

He then took a deep breath as he patted his trembling body and muttered.

"I just hope that they are not back…"

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Vampire Slave Number 43, or the self-named, Azriel Ruinous, learned about the history between the humans and the Vampires and it filled him with rage and hatred.

Nonetheless, he was helpless to do anything.
After years and years of suppression, the Vampires have become the weakest race in the world.

However, lady luck seemed to be on his side as Azriel found an ancient jar filled with mysterious blood that will not only change his, but his race's destiny as well.

This, will be the story about the rise of the self-named, Azriel Ruinous, and the Return of the Forgotten Blood Empire.

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Warning: This novel is not a 'Quick Happy Pill' where mc becomes op easily and then overpowers anyone he faces.
If you want to read something like that, you can read my other book.
Neither is this book a one-man show, there will be people supporting MC from behind and they will be better than mc in certain areas.
MC will need their help constantly.
Of course, he will still be the main focus of this story.
Another thing,
The MC has to fight a whole race, being soft-hearted isn't an option, nor he is soft-hearted.
He will kill, and he will kill without any guilt.
He will also kill innocents, he will kill women, children, old, and young, he will kill anyone and everyone, because,
This is a War. A Bloody War.
The story will contain gore, torture, killing innocents, and explicit sex scenes, you have been warned.
No Rape
No NTR.

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English is not my primary language, however, I can assure you that you won't face any major problems with grammar,
If you do notice an error, just comment on it and I will remove it. I'll be counting on you all for that.

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This cover does not belong to me, if it's yours, just tell me and I will remove it, or credit you for it, whatever you wish. You are the boss!

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Also, do check out my other book,
Supreme Harem God System (R18)
if you want to read something cultured.

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    Shinfreyer

    finally! a book with war setting that won't get wishy washed by morals like I won't kill innocents!! or a book about a non human MC but still cares for the other race!! like a demon king yet still saves human!! CHOOSE YOUR OWN RACE FOR MY SANITY'S SAKE! I HOPE THIS CONTINUES!! I LOVE THE STORY SO FAR!

    2yr
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    Austin_B_1332

    I have enjoyed the novel so far. The mc was really annoying for the first few chapters but his character has improved over the course of the novel. I wish that more than one chapter was released a day as the chapters feel too short. Highly recommend reading it.

    2yr
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    SleepDeprivedSloth

    Felt important so i think i should talk about this. i know how important the mc of the story can be, some people do not like Azriel, so here are his character traits. -he kills innocents. -he is naive and reckless. -he likes to fight and get stronger. -he does not like to read. of course, it will change in the future, he will be the one who leads the empire, a leader can't be a Brute who doesn't think anything. He will change and get better. Actually, he is already a lot better than before within 30ish chapters and will keep on improving as the story progress. please be patient with him and me. hmm hmm, that's all i wanted to say. I hope have a great time reading.

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    OmnipresenceBeing

    THIS IS GOOD........................................................................................................... I WANT VIOLENCE.............................................

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    Altara_Blue

    Hey 👋, I am not reall good in reviewing but let’s go. This book as of chapter eight is really good to read and has a bit of myster as for why the mc had that dream and, if the system is his own cheat or comes with mysterious blood which he got. I hope you won’t drop this. Furthermore, for those who don’t know his other book is really good with a nice harem plot and system

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    2yr
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    Steineer

    [Final Score] ⭐⭐⭐⭐ [Writing Quality] ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Pretty good, a few typos here and there but they aren't common. [Stability of Updates] ⭐⭐⭐ The author can miss a day or two but the usual upload schedule is once a day [Story Development] ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ It's a pretty good novel I must say. The main character starts off as irritating and does dumb mistakes but he learns from them and doesn't repeat them. I really liked the idea of vampires who were at the top of the chain, feared by all turning into an oppressed race and slowly but surely starting to stand for themselves to overpower every opposer and stand proud as the strongest and feared race [Character Design] ⭐⭐⭐ The character designs are not bad, they're what you expect of a vampire novel. [World Background] ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Absolutely love the lore behind the world and I hope we'll get more info on different countries, kingdoms, religions, etc.

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    SleepDeprivedSloth

    So yes, of course, I am going to give my book a 5 stars. That is like a rule. ... Okay, so let me be clear. This book is not an sm*t book like my other book, it has a more serious plot. So of course, since I want character development as well, my mc will not be a perfect one. Remember, we have read tons of novels, he has not. So don't expect him to be very smart. However, he will have people supporting him from behind who will ensure that he doesn't make bad decisions, but you will have to wait for them to appear. ... Warning: this is a revenge novel, so there will be lots of killing. Mc will even kill innocents without a shred of mercy. There will be gore. So read if you are comfortable with that stuff. Thank you~~ ... Now with that done, I welcome you for the ride~~

    2yr
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    Shaq_Fu
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    i generly dont review this early, but from the authors other work, and the start of this one, i can say its gonna be really good and special. its an intresting take on vamp stories, give it a try.

    2yr
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    XxErnestoxX

    Unlike your first book this mc is really not great. Naive Stupid prideful The story is interesting but very slow. The pov change so early in the story to show other characters is very bad in my opinion because I think side characters and mobs shouldn’t get so much screen time. The whole nationalsm like fanatics of the vampire race is also very annoying and I feel good that they lost because of how they act.

    2yr
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    Dretno

    Ok so this book is great, the evil mc with a deep hatred against humans is what makes this story stand out from the rest of the vampire novels. However I don't particularly like the idea of Vampires being shown as the weakest race or believed to be so, as to me what makes Vampires unique is their arrogance and superiority complex and the deep fear they struck in the hearts of humans.

    2yr
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    DoubleCoN

    Gotta say I really enjoy the novel so far! I think it has lots of potential especially if the author keeps up and gets a more regular release schedule. I think if this novel breaks 300 chapters more people will be flocking to support it.

    2yr
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    Mimi_imiM

    Hello, this is my first ever review (on a book and in English) so please ignore any errors I might make. First of all, I’d like to address how well the author describes the world, its people and their actions, which makes it easy for the reader to create a picture in their mind and follow along. It’s quite impressive how well and plausible some of the characters, their actions and their changes are explained and portrayed. There are rarely questions left as to why or how a they do something or how they changed to what they are now. The story progresses very smoothly while not being too slow nor too fast and always explaining enough but not going to much into detail, which makes this book quite fun to read. Sometimes, there are smaller spelling or grammatical errors but they don’t influence the overall quality of the work. Thank you dear author for sharing this amazing story, I enjoyed reading it so far (chapter 45). Please keep up the awesome work. [img=recommend]

    2yr
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    Sheikh_Mehrab

    This story blew up my mind. I never thought of a vampire genre story this way. I hope i can see more of this masterpiece. Keep up the good work.

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    Sleepy_Slime

    The book was really well written! The mc having no morals also works really well with his background! I also love the sheer brutality in this book! I hope to see where this story goes!

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    KenKanechi

    This good. I don't read new novel usually but I was bored and gave it a try and I don't regret it. I like ruthless mc and he IS RUTHLESS . Don't stop and keep updating. Thnx

    2yr
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    Silver2285

    You want a review? Here's 1. Yeah You are my fire The one desire Believe when I say I want it that way But we are two worlds apart Can't reach to your heart When you say That I want it that way Tell me why Ain't nothin' but a heartache Tell me why Ain't nothin' but a mistake Tell me why I never wanna hear you say I want it that way Am I your fire? Your one desire Yes, I know it's too late But I want it that way Tell me why Ain't nothin' but a heartache Tell me why Ain't nothin' but a mistake Tell me why I never wanna hear you say I want it that way Now I can see that we've fallen apart From the way that it used to be, yeah No matter the distance I want you to know That deep down inside of me You are my fire The one desire You are (you are, you are, you are) Don't wanna hear you say Ain't nothin' but a heartache Ain't nothin' but a mistake (don't wanna hear you say) I never wanna hear you say (oh, yeah) I want it that way Tell me why Ain't nothin' but a heartache Tell me why Ain't nothing but a mistake Tell me why I never want to hear you say (never wanna hear you say) I want it that way Tell me why Ain't nothin' but a heartache Ain't nothin' but a mistake Tell me why I never want to hear you say (don't want to hear you say) I want it that way 'Cause I want it that way

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    Pospp
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    Harem pls …… …………………………………… …………………………………… …………………………………… …………………………………… …………………………………… …………………………………… …………………………………… …………………………………… …………………………………… …………………………………… ………………………………………

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    TheWorthyOne

    I am the Exp of my sword... EXP is my blood... EXP is my body... I have created over 1000 useless Reviews... Unknown to death,nor to live... I have withstood the pain of creating many more useless Reviews... Yet, those hands will never write anything useful... And so i pray... UNLIMITED EXP WORKS

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    Claqiooo

    I like it... so 5 stars. What can u do about it?~ [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    QDellanir

    This is even better than Supreme Harem God System! The world building is amazing in combination with Shgs and I love that the protagonist isn’t from earth. Makes the story feel more authentic. The Azriel Origin Arc was great.

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