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Pokemon! The real deal!
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Meet Kai, A Pokemon fan who got a little more than he bargained for when he loaded up his old save file from Heart gold. Finding that he had been sucked into the game its self, waking up in the world of Pokemon to begin his adventure and become the very best!
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there's nothing wrong with the grammar or dialogue in the story or the updates as that's not how I grade a story but rather by the content unless it's unreadable. which was all right during the first chapter but then the second chapter came around and the story just kind of fell right off the cliff. why??? because the main character is a very blatant Mary Sue is the short of it. how so?? well basically the story runs with the trope of regional professors just handing out regional starters to anyone who basically asks like they have an unlimited amount of these super rare regional starters and probably their unconditional support as well. so go out and catch as many Pokemon as you want and the original professor we'll just take care of the bill for feeding and healthcare for all these Pokemon. as it's not like they'd want to try to get the best Pokemon trainers for a generation and they decide that by some type of test maybe 🤔🤔 and they'd be the three children to get those three rare regional starters and the support of the regional professor and not some rando who just shows up to his lab.
this story is more like the pokemon world we see and play. unlike most pokemon fanfic on this sight with is refreshing.