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PLANE WALKER
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Warnings : if you don't like weak to strong or an MC who earn his powers from scratch or use Deception and trickery for himself then is not for you. especially if im slow in update because I've learn my leason that haste will just degrade the quality of my chapters.
this is also a slow story.
if there are wrong grammars etc then its probably because im dead tired to respond naturally, forgot to use Grammarly or just plain lazy which is unlikely.
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There are various types of Gods. as long you have one of the O, then your a God ( Omnipotent, Omnipresent, Omniscient )
Lately he was... infuriated.
He was annoyed on the random anomalies ( SI ) entering inside his territory ( Multiverse) and causing troubles. so he wondered what would happen if HE return the favour by sending his own 'Champions'.
Normally He isn't allowed to pick souls as that would gain Ire from Gods of Rebirth.
so he snatched two random souls.
A 17 Year old human male that already seen the harsh Reality. ( Frame up. Disowned. and Died because of his Traitorous only Friend that used him as a stepping stone for his own goal. )
and a 19 Yr old. Lustful good for nothing human N.E.E.T with a serious history of Sexual Assault that leads to his death. ( Mutilated by the Victim's Brother. )
Expectedly there was a veritable difference between the two Soul signatures in question; while the Former soul felt like calculating, ruthless and selfish coldness.
the latter gave him a nefarious and unpleasant feeling of malice, malevolent hate and all around utter evilness with a large amount of Lust.
Would this combination enough too cause havoc around the Universe? maybe. Would they team up? Unlikely. Would they fight each other? so long as they interfere each other.
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Rational self inserts are well-written self inserts solely because they don't break reader's immersion. You self-insert yourself into the SI fanfic imagining what would you do in the self-insert's shoes. They need to be realistic. We need to be realistic. Think about it. You are reading a story where a guy is reincarnated/transmigrated to a foreign universe and the first thing they do is freak out. That's good. That is a normal human reaction from getting cosmically kidnapped from one world to another, especially a fantasy world you read manga about. But the next thing they do defines whether the self insert fanfic is rational or not, or I would like to say whether the fanfic is well-written or wish fulfilment trash. Does the self insert... Have fun carelessly exploring and trying out their new magical powers? Plan on meeting and befriending the canon characters? Instantly befriend the main canon characters through their apparent godlike social skills? Easily create a harem with their reincarnated good looks or otherworldly transmigrated visage? Instantly become a genius in the mystical arts without no hard training whatsoever? Constantly allude to knowledge and idiom they should not have and better yet, with the canon characters not questioning, calling out, or noticing this strange behavior? Save someone that they know is going to die if they don't do anything without thinking of the butterflied consequences? Congratulations. If the self insert fanfic you are reading answers yes to one or two of the following questions the SI you are reading is not rational. It's wish fulfilment etc. The next realistic and rational thing the self insert should do is Survive. The self insert should plan and secure their survival. This is their new life now. This is our new life now. This is not a game or one of the mangas we read pre-insert. The fiction you and the self insert read is now reality and we should treat it as such. If the SI was reincarnated, they don't have to worry as much compared to being inexplicably transmigrated. They have no identity, money, and shelter so they better be taking their situation seriously. It is after-all, our new life now. And if the SI got where they were by a ROB(random omnipotent being), I wouldn't be reading that Self-insert fanfic anyway because ROBs are trash and they ruin stories. Im inspired at this person's long quote so don't expect me to put some Harem ( 12 ) wish fulfilment Fan Fictional story as I am serious this time.