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People in Middle Earth: Slaying the Dragon at the beginning
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When he woke up, Karl found that he had traveled to Middle-earth.
There are not only elves, humans, dwarves, hobbits and other civilizations with their own characteristics.
There are also Orcs, Wargs, Mammoths, Undead, Ice Dragons, Smaugs, Balrogs, Demon King Sauron, and even the existence of supreme gods.
Just when Karl was weeping for the upcoming wars and battles in this dangerous Middle-earth world, he found that he...
Thus, in this middle-earth continent, the reputation of a ranger began to spread...
Middle-earth people: "That man is a legend..."
Gandalf: "F*ck legend, the most greedy and shameless person I've ever seen is Karl."
Queen of the Elf: "Well... it's hard to say..."
Elrond: "That bastard abducted my daughter!"
Nine Rings: "Carl, it's a devil."
Sauron: "I shouldn't have messed with him! ..
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note: This novel does not belong to me, it is in Chinese and I am translating it, sorry in advance if some sentences are not well understood
PD:CHAPTERS WILL BE UPLOADED EVERY DAY, DON'T WORRY
[MY LANGUAGE IS NOT ENGLISH, I MADE THIS WITH THE HELP OF GOOGLE TRANSLATE]
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The spacing between the text is weird and just horrible to read with dyslexia. I don't have a problem with the story but The way it is written makes it just not enjoyable to read. (tried to write the review like the fanfic)
Can we have the originale name ? ....,.............................................................................................................
o maior problema e ate os capitulos 11-12 os espaçamentos sao muito ruins mas depois melhora, a tradução nao e tao ruim a nao ser que voce seja uma pessoa que presta muita atenção em detalhes(infelizmente algo que tenho me tornado) e bem suportavel para a maioria, recomendo ao tradutor/editor arrumar os primeiros capitulos na questao espaçamentos como nos capitulos posteriores 12+, por que acaba com a vontade de quem quer ler a obra.
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Desde el cap 12 o 11 se puede leer un poco mejor, pero aunque la escritura es mala, al menos cuando se traduce a mi idioma, no es tanto, que pena que ya no se hayan podido subir mas historias.
3.6 STAR REVIEW, ENGLISH IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE. world background: it is based on tolkien's middle earth, i have nothing more to add. 5 stars. Character design: it is rare to see Thorin act like a Chinese young master, this section can be improved. 3 star. Development of the story: Very few chapters to comment on, for now I will give it 4 stars because it seems promising. Update stability: 50 chapters in 3 days, perfect, 5 stars. Writing quality: this section is terrible, lines that separate leaving blank spaces, names that change non-stop, and sentences that are unconnected or that make no sense. Much could be improved, 1 star