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Bab 2: First Dawn of the Path

Pain.

Pain was everywhere.

I felt as if the plane crashed into my body.

What was surprising was the feeling of every of my bones and fibers holding a part of the pain.

Even more surprising was the feeling of me being able to push against the force of the air plane.

‚I have a chance to safe them.'

‚I can't give up!'

‚AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA'

I pushed and pushed against it then it happend as I felt Newtens inertia law. The pain and it's pressure intensified.

‚This most be the Second Part of the impact force!'

‚If I can stop it from bypassing me I win and I can save them!'

I gave more then I had. It was at that moment I felt a new kind of pain.

A burning pain.

It wasn't spread out. No it was deep inside.

Power started surging. Unknown to Hans he gathered the attention of something.

‚This power.

With it I will save you Chrisi.

AAAAAAAAAAA'

Slowly but surly Hans pushed the pressure he felt back.

Then there was it. A small light. Like a candle shortly before extinguishing.

‚CHRISI!!'

‚Brother! It hurts!'

‚Just give in. I will hold it for you!'

Then it happened.

A third wave of pain hit Hans. Bigger and heavier then ever. Heavier then it should have ever been.

In the end it was too much and Hans got crushed.

‚NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAA'

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This was the story of Hans. A person a bit quirky. A bit strange, but in the end still a good hearted brother who would give his all for the ones he loved.

Or that it should have been however there was still something watching.

Fascinated from the will power and potential showcased its curiosity was awakened.

If this was something,

positive or negative,

nobody new.


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This is a very short chapter. A Intermission you could call it.

A regular coming later in maybe an hour, two or three.

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