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Overpowered King
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- Kualitas penulisan
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- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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Para mi lo estas asiendo muy op demasiado rápido además los arrogantes ichia lo aceptaran tan rápido ? yo no lo creo,además debería tener un harem comenzando por hinata y deberías tener un punto de vista de ella de acuerdo a como la va conquistando
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hi the is stored is what I can say to much really I don't mean berway it just will good if is MC mysterious? not too became crazy and fool women hungry it really no fun the story but the way off show his powers not good it will be the best if you make no harem smart mysterious slow romance live naruto stored alone and I am sorry if what I see make unhappy but I really sorry and continue
Shameless 5 Star I have always thought of making a novel and I’m in high school I may get a job but I’m a senior I get off early so I can write a good bit so it isn’t that big a issue but it may help me fix punctuation and get ready for college since English is my worse subject others help makes it easier to fix and cope with