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OVERPOWERED IN DOULUO DALU
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Our Mc is a adult of age 15 currently he is in a white space where God (haters gonna hate) has told him that he will accept his any five wishes,lets see what the future has in store for the Mc as he does not know about Douluo dalu more than average, for those looking for a novel from a pro writer ,don't come here and bash my face and if you do come here, please explain to me patiently what did I do wrong, THE MC IS NOT SMART , HE IS LIKE THE NARUTO OF DOULUO DALU,He easily yrusts people and makes mistakes so dont complain later
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Yikes, what a joke, trashiest trashfic. What a joke What a joke What a joke What a joke What a joke What a joke What a joke What a joke What a joke What a joke What a joke
Amazing job , This is a good story an i really like it ,trying not to give a spoiler review. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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I can already tell its going to be bad just from reading the synopsis "Mc is a ***** of age 15" A 15 year old is not an ***** but an adolescent.
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MC รฉ um cara extremamente patรฉtico que ganhou 5 desejos: 1 - Em sua primeira conversa com Cane chama-o crianรงa, mas poucos capรญtulos depois viram irmรฃo jurados. (MC corpo de 10 com uma mente de 17, enquanto Cane tem apenas 6 anos) 2 - Primeiro desejo foi um sistema infinito que o cara nem usa, quase morreu e nem pensou em usar. Depois de usar nem perguntou todas suas funรงรตes e limitaรงรตes. 3 - Sua falta de cuidado gerou o segundo desejo, que foi uma forma de ajustar o sistema a cagada que fez antes. 4 - tem um corpo pico do mundo e uma tecnica pico, e mesmo assim tem um corpo menos treinado que o outros garotos. 5 - Nรฃo comprou outras tecnicas do sistema ( aprimoramento corporal, artes de espadas, e coisas do tipo) 6 - O sistema tem poรงรตes, tecnicas, armas e espiritos ( ou seja tem de tudo), mas mesmo assim ele fica desiquilibrado. 7 - Aceita um mestre, mesmo um sistema que รฉ o melhor instrutor. 8 - MC livro รฉ aberto com seu mestre, ele revela tudo, isso รฉ muito irritante, e quando mentiu teve que encobrir a mentira, e para isso desperdiรงou outros 2 desejos. > dou nota 5 apenas para o plano de fundo pq jรก foi feito pelo original. Os outros nรฃo merecem uma nota acima de 3.
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I want more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
more moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremorevvvvmoremoremoremoremoremorev moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
i didn't read yet, but im only here for an over-powered mc could careless if he was stupid or not since its a fan-fic don't got much hopes for it anyway
I love the ideas behind your story and look forward to more. Iโm glad you put the effort into making this and thank you for writing this. ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป
Thanks for the chapters and for your hard working and hope you keep writing also make him get more powerful spirit in future so he can be overpowerd like the name of the fan fic, thanks for your work keep writing...
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original story line just add 3rd and 4th char-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Just rating to balance out trolls that have nothing better to do than bash on other peopleโs work with out giving a valid and informed reason. Filler
Like it, just slow updates and the writing is s bit hectic, wrong punctuation, and a good amount of mistakes in writing with random lines skipped, if you can get over that the story is pretty fun
Not bad, I like the story so far keep going ^^ :-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-);-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-);-);-);-);-);-);-):-P
I love how it begin more release plus !! The faces of all shriek would be extremely funny when they will see the strenght of his sect that will be the most overpowered power in this world. I'm waiting to see that ! :D
It's good,but the writing is one of the greatest shits i had ever seen.And the thing about the MC have infinite system points,but be weak is retard.
MC is an extremely pathetic guy who won 5 wishes: 1 - In his first conversation with Cane calls him child, but few chapters later saw brother jurors. (MC body of 10 with a mind of 17, while Cane is only 6) 2 - First wish was an infinite system that the guy neither uses, almost died and neither thought to use. After using neither asked all its functions and limitations. 3 - His lack of care generated the second desire, which was a way to adjust the system the **** he did before. 4 - has a peak body of the world and a peak technique, and yet has a body less trained than the other boys. 5 - Did not buy other system techniques (body enhancement, sword gear, and the like) 6 - The system has potions, techniques, weapons and spirits (that is, it has everything), but even so it becomes unbalanced. 7 - Accepts a master, even a system that is the best instructor. 8 - MC book is opened with his master, he reveals everything, this is very annoying, and when he lied had to find the lie, and for that he wasted another 2 wishes. > I give 5 note only to the background because it was already done by the original. The others do not deserve a grade above 3.
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