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Otsutsuki: The Path to Supremacy
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After a failed experiment, Hajime finds himself in a world he thought was fictitious, using his future knowledge to his advantage, and also being born directly from a goddess. Will he shake the foundation or will he fall like many others who have tried in the past?
(This is Naruto's world, but since it is far away, then there will be very little interaction at first, so be warned.)
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the grammar is almost unreadable. "almost" because I literally had to shut half my brain off to comprehend what I was reading. story's good tho
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The story is unique and I'm kinda excited to see his future children................. . . . . . .......................
read this on my laptop and this is good novel. I personally like villins and selfish mcs. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the start was good. but after that it was really bad๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
dari semua fiksi ya saya baca di masuk dalam 10 besar terbaik, kelemahan nya cuman satu bab nya dikit pembaharuan nya lama masak cuman 21 bab
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very good fanfic but could have saved kaguya------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Author here, I would like to thank everyone who has been supporting me in the writing of my fanfic, where I try to put stories that I think would be good in a different storyline. And about my first chapters that I've been seeing that there are a lot of people asking me to improve them, I will do that, but for now I don't have time, because my life is busy, but I will edit the beginning, to make it clearer and also to have a better intonation for reading, thanks for the support.