Otherworldly Saint

LV 13

Ikaris265

Hi fellow author! I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. Your story is absolutely captivating, and I’m eager to see what comes next. Seriously, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up! Not that you need it, but hey, good job! I’m loving every bit of it so far. Oh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws. This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’m bracing myself for any critique, no matter how brutal, so let it rip! Your honest opinions would be invaluable. Thanks so much for considering giving it a read. Best, Ikaris P.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!

LV 14

Tenzing_Choeying_5139

This sotry has a lot of potential. Hope mc aspires to gain power and immortality, also hoep Author finishes this book unlike his other one