/ Anime & Comics / One Piece: Perverted Upgrade System
One Piece: Perverted Upgrade System
4.37 (45 peringkat)
Ringkasan
Two years after transmigrating to the One Piece world, Rei a young man from earth finally get himself an upgrade system that would him survive the cruel world. However, there is one catch. The system seemed to be e bit perverted.
[ DING!!! A mission has been issued]
[ Lick A girl.]
[ Reward: 1000 Upgrade Points.]
What will he do, with the mission that seemed to pit him against all the girls in One Piece world? Follow his journey as Rei made his own legend in One Piece World.
This is just a wish-fulfilling story. If you guys are looking for some mind-blowing story, you might not be able to find it here. But if you want something with lemon that you could read while turning your brains off, then you might try this one.
if you want to support.
www.patreon.com/RafaelCarmelo
tagar
Penggemar
-
![Daoistj0DnFp]()
Daoistj0DnFp Berpartisipasi 53 -
![Rafael_Carmelo]()
Rafael_Carmelo Berpartisipasi 15 -
![Deusxmachina]()
Deusxmachina Berpartisipasi 15
Status Power Mingguan
-- Peringkat
Power 
-- Power
stone Anda Mungkin Juga Menyukai
45Ulasan-ulasan
4.37
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
Bagikan pikiran Anda dengan orang lain
Tulis ulasan
Mc is disgusting, beta without dignity and a scum. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Yeah wasted time on this... "MC" is rather simpy and the system is rather bad. then its adult content is rather questionable since its only licking and hehas blue balls welp
Membuka SPOILER
Well i dont think i will come back i stayed to read the full story and not jump to conclusions but i can safely say this is rubbish. There are nerfs, filler chapters, he flirts with Nojiko but finally abandons her without even trying to get her back, and he is a slave to his system, besides the system has its own conscience and we can say that it represents the author, nerfing the MC delaying his becoming strong and He is also misinformed about Haki and how to train it, but ignores constructive comments and doesn't change the story. Summary, this is not worth reading (Google translate)
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I would like to introduce the girls in One Piece Alvida Baby 5 Belo Betty Black Maria Carrot Charlotte Custard Charlotte Pudding Charlotte Smoothie Domino Ginrummy Gion Hina Hiramera Ishilly Jewelry Bonney Kalifa Kaya Koala Kozuki Hiyori Makino Mero Mikita Monet Perona Porche Raki Sadie Sarahebi Shalria Shyarly Speed Stussy Sugar (draft is not a child as in the original) Tashigi Ulti Wanda White Bay Yamato Zala Character that is Kuja (not including Boa Hancock because I will include it in another topic instead) Aphelandra Kikyo Marguerite Poppy The character is the princess in the story. Nefertari Vivi Rebecca Shirahoshi Vinsmoke Reiju Viola The character who is the queen in the story Boa Hancock Kinderella Mororon Characters from the movie and from various special episodes in the story. Ain Ann Baccarat Carina Carmen Desire Guarana Honey Queen Nightin (not old) Olive
The history, is non-existent The grammar is... bearable, the author most likely doesn't know what the duck he'd doing and apparently he's an idiot, 23 chapters and he STILL Doesn't know what past present and future mean.
[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
(โขโฟโข)(โขโฟโข)(โขโฟโข)(. โ แด โ.)(โขโฟโข)(โขโฟโข)(โขโฟโข)(โขโฟโข)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)(. โ แด โ.)
Need More!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A shameless author reviewing his own story ^_^. Hope you will enjoy this one, please tell me if there was anything you felt unsatisfied with or felt that it could be better. All advice is accepted and very appreciated
[img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update] [img=update]
Need More!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
bro I *ucking love this story please keep it consistent . .............................................................................
Un mc pourri une fic pourri un auteur pourri Tien finalement ils vont bien ensemble c 3 la Mdr Mc pervers filles soumise sans personnalitรฉ
Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update
perte de temps azdfohijzijijijijijijijzijzijzijzijzijzijzijijijjofjiajiafjifajiofzjiofazjioazfjioazfjfoabhjkmfjksdgmhuiqsdfhjb dfhuigbhjlqghiogqhuibgqf
I just had a hilarious thought based on the synopsis system: lick a woman me: today I identify as a woman lick noise system: that's not how that works me: that's pretty transphopic(idk) of you system system: ... ding mission complete