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Humanity dreams of living forever, so they try to achieve immortality, but not for 'Arashi,' who is already immortal. He always thinks that this immortality is a curse and will bring eternal loneliness.
But like all living things, he also has a dream, so join 'Arashi' in his journey to change his curse into a blessing.
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This is a translation !? it's pretty good it doesn't feel like a translation 👍
Great Story so far. Only downside is that the protagonist's power progression is incredibly uneven, but apart from that there are no problems
My first comment was deleted, but I'll still repost comments every weekends author. The thing is the story is good by large margin. New characters in crew mc is.. Ok at best. But after 100-200 chaps in mtl there would be yaoi shet. Like mc have a clone that gets gender changed to female by ivankov. Then the female clone and sabo gets into...that was really disgusting for me🤢. In last comment i request the translator to change that shet but idk what he thought he deleted my comment.
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Огромное спасибо за вашу историю. Случайно на неё наткнулся, но прочитал за один раз сразу всё) С нетерпением буду ждать дальнейших глав. Очень жду реакцию каноничных персонажей на силу гг)))
This is so amazing who knew a story about someone who can not die would be so good
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Очень хорошо продумано. Но я пожалел что начал так рано читать это произведение... Очень мало написано. Автор, надеюсь ты не забросиш его.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁
Es una grandiosa historia 👌🏻 con un desarrollo de la trama fluido y bien estructurado, cuenta con una gramática y traducción bastante decente, lo genial de la novela es que empieza su travesía en la época donde los más fuertes son jóvenes y están en su prime y el MC tiene bien claro sus metas y ambiciones desarrollando su propio ejército junto con avances tecnológicos y en especial la mejora escalonada de su propio poder, como dice el dicho "lo que no te mata te hace más fuerte" pero en este caso "el MC es lo que te mata te hace más fuerte" 😎💪🏻 jaja 😁 Realmente lo recomiendo
One of my rare 5 stars love this shyt. Everything is so enjoyable, even if it has rare chinese shit but its so rare like two or three times in the story and its not even tht chinese shit. The chinese shit is talking bout dragons shit or maybe I have become racist. Hope you finish translating all of it thx for the story bro.
Огромное спасибо за вашу историю. Случайно на нее наткнулся, но прочитал за один раз сразу всё) С нетерпением буду ждать главу. Очень жду ответов характерных персонажей насилии гг)))
Перевод выполнен очень хорошо. История интересная, хотя MC безумно op, история раскрывает ее интересным образом. Единственная проблема, с которой я столкнулся (и я видел это так много раз), заключается в том, что в синопсисе нет никакой информации об a) оригинальном китайском, или b) ссылке на mtl, или хотя бы c) ссылке на оригинальные китайские сырцы. Мол, давай хотя бы указывай авторство романа, который ты загружаешь, который тебе не принадлежит. 🙏🙏🙏
It's very good, it doesn't even seem translated, the MC is a bit too overpowered, which makes it a bit boring sometimes, I prefer a more gradual progression, but overall it develops very well.
No começo fiquei incomodado com o medo do mc ou até do mc ver seu poder como uma maldição e agir todo vitimizado, mas depois que foi construíndo seu personagem e a aparente luta ideológica sobre Justiça tornou toda existência da imortalidade dele significativa. E achei bem legal as conexões do enredo com o passado do mc e como as coisas vão se conectando e se encaixando, o mais incrível e ver como a dinâmica entre o mc e os tripulantes torna tudo interessante.
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If you continue the story without abandoning it, it could become one of the best One Piece fanfics. After all, I've read a lot of One Piece fanfics. It's already over 80 of them. Yours is the only one that explored Gol D. Roger to the point where it's incredible, I hope. happily the moment the canon begins and the protagonist meets the straw hats I hope he at least saves Ace and doesn't let him die please this could be a lot but don't abandon the story it's hard to find a fun one piece fanfic that wasn't abandoned
The concept of the fan fic is good and finally a realistic mc who has ambition and isn’t rooted on dreams Goals are more important
The translation is done really well. The story is interesting, even though the mc is insanely op the story fleshes it out in an interesting manner. The only issue I have (and I've seen this so many times) is that the synopsis does not have any information about a) the original chinese, or b) a link to the mtl , or atleast c) a link to the original Chinese raws. Like, come on at least give credit to the novel you're uploading which is not yours. 🙏🙏🙏