Novel's Extra: The Lost Heir of Dragon Queen

LV 3

lance_8

Hello, author here! I’ll keep this brief. World Setting: This story takes place in a modern fantasy world filled with magic, mysteries, and powerful entities. About the MC: The protagonist is a half-dragon, born to the Dragon Queen but forced to live away from her. Their relationship plays a pivotal role in the story. The MC is not overpowered—while he is strong for his age, he has clear limitations and plenty of room to grow. Novel Focus: This novel combines elements of wish fulfillment with a solid, character-driven story. While there are satisfying moments for the readers, the focus is on meaningful development, world-building, and emotional depth. A Note: This is my first time writing, so I’m open to feedback! Please let me know about any mistakes or areas for improvement—I’m eager to learn and grow. Thank you for reading 😊 Feel free to treat this as a Q&A, and I’ll answer any questions you have!"

LV 4

D_Spectre

Back with the promised review. Currently up-to-date with the novel and I'm loving it so far. Gave it a full 5 star in all so that it will be noticed better but I'll say, the World Background hasn't been really touched and the MC's character is a bit confusing since he has an unknown backstory. I highly recommend it and I hope the author doesn't drop. Thanks again for such a good novel this far 😁😁😁

LV 14

The_Ruler_001

A good rating because of the interesting story and hoping it would get more better in future

LV 14

Behzod

Good

LV 15

brody_lol

Good story but the reason why I gave it a lower score is because the author missed so much good potential. You start to get into the background of this abandoned child to the dragon queen and understand all the mistreatment he underwent because of his mother hating him for being half dragon, and when it comes to this climatic build up to see how the mc will deal with it…… he’s just like oh yeah I forgive you super anticlimactic really could of drawn that out and got really good character growth and development rather than just yeah you abandoned me it’s ok give me power blah blah blah man this could of been a great story that pulled you in mushed shot bro😔

LV 11

Teller_tells

Great read. I will update my review after 50 chapters

LV 4

D_Spectre

Haven't read it yet but the synopsis is a good one. If it's good, I will update my review

Looks promising... I think the author rushed a bit because most of the chapters were fast-paced without going into the necessary details and the dialogue was a bit stiff.

LV 4

Saffi_turtle

Okay I have read until chapter seven and I have few words for author first of all you are too bland with your writing style your chapters are very short in webnovels a long chapter is needed to entice people to read as to make them believe that it's worth it you put locked on chapters too early atleast fifty chapters in even with long chapters if you want your work to get popular that is otherwise ignore my advice third give proper idea of the mentality and thought process of the main character to know him better by the readers 🫠 You are a newbie that's why I have many complaints cause I know you have potential anyways hope you won't hate me after reading all this have a good day