Naruto The Thunder Calamity

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UnenlightenedOne

is this one of those typical Chinese fic..hide the strength.get insulted.prove them wrong.ppl forget about it and repeat

LV 6

InnerVoice

What’s the point of having the power if he doesn’t even touch it for 100+ chapters? Please tell me he at least train the power but don’t reveal it in battle

LV 4

Shi_Wu

trash translation... Thunder escape instead of lightning release... its pure mtl copy/paste and some sentences doesnt even make sense not to even mention how hard it is to read it

LV 13

rodents_577

i didn't understand anything I read in this stupid novel . it has a lot of potential.but if u can't read it then it's trash

LV 4

LastGod

LITERALLY the first sentence is unreadble then it gets worse the more u read this is making my eyes bleed no one should ever read this.

LV 14

Jaccam

If the pacing is this slow then it’s not feasible for the story to go anywhere substantial enough before it eventually gets dropped because it’s a slice of life slug fest that will burn the author out.(pls prove me wrong author)

LV 4

Zed1_Eren_

rumble rumble fruit is a logia and also it allows user to fly or move quickly (teleport) so there is no need to be so afraid of danzo and so on . But yeah it was all good I just hate it's slow pace and romance mainly romance where mc was soo much passive 🤢

LV 4

Eyes_ofthemany

This is my first time reviewing a story and this is probably the worse I’ve ever read please take it down

LV 4

Aziz_Yaakoubi

top level trash novel with typical Chinese plot, huge amount of wrong names and mixed up words, no concept of grammar and literally forced plot and romance. even a children's story book will have a more logical story progression then this mental contamination.

LV 14

rorschach

I don't understand all the hate this translation is getting. Clearly the haters are newbies who are reading translations for the first time. It is going to suck sometimes. but you gotta learn to ignore the frustrating gender changes, minor plot holes and idioms that are hard to understand and just to enjoy the show. Guys this is a good chinese translation of Fanfic. At least compared to others i have read.

LV 4

_VOIDLESS_

This is the first sentence of the novel " Gently wake up the sleeping soul..... I... Huh?" do what you will with this information

LV 3

JiwaMiwa

The quality is alright, it's readable I was confused on Suisei's gender for a long time. The story gets a bit tedious on the Land of Moon and Kumogakure part. The thing that bothers me is that the Land of Moon is nowhere near the Land of Lightning. It's an island nation south of the Land of Tea (I don't think the author knows where that is relative to Konoha either). The Land of Lightning is a Peninsula that borders the Land of Frost only. It is the Land of Frost that borders the Land of Hot Water. You clearly failed Ninja geography, you should accompany Jiraiya in returning to the Ninja Academy.

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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fhjj_hysjsjs

.........................great...........

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cavaliere_royale

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DeathConqueror

is this a Translation ? if yes , Original link please. is this a Translation ? if yes , Original link please is this a Translation ? if yes , Original link please