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The Kaisugan, or "Shattered Eyes," is a Kekkei Genkai unique to a young boy whose soul does not belong to this world. Watching the Kyūbi rampage and feeling such horrid chakra emanating from the demon fox, Kagami Suguru made a vow to himself. His eyes bled with dread, yet gleamed within the darkness.

"This world is broken,"

Shall we shatter it some more?

[ So, I just finished catching up with Naruto: The Wind Calamity and I am dying for new chapters to be released. This Fanfic will serve as an outlet for my desires while I wait. Thank you, Devil_Hex. Love your work. OuO ]

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Error_Uzumaki

This is Honestly such a banger that, I almost wept. The work is so good that they should be paid for gracing us with such god-tier work.

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4mth
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GodPhaze

Love it so far can't wait for more, want to know if this is a original fanfic if not could you let me know the source so I can beige it. If not that ok to just don't drop it if it's your original I really want to know how everything plays out

5mth
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EternalEden

It's a good story, and very entertaining to read. But also rather frustrating because his own actions come back to bite him. Sometimes I have to wonder if he's a genius or a fool. Like, trading his fire technique for better fire jutsu. He just became a chunin and could've just learned better ones anyway. Now everyone and their grandma not only knows his signature technique, but uses it better than him. Or how he just stood around doing nothing, letting Danzo kill Fugaku and get stronger. Despite showing he could interfere from dozens of miles away like last time. I dunno man. It's a great story, but the MC's had 12 years, has triple eye hacks and it feels like he's STILL trying to find his bearings, lol. You can just think of this as me venting. Still like your story, and keep up the good work.

1mth
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HardenedWood

This is a pretty exceptional story, I don’t really have any major complaints about it, just minor ones that don’t detract from my enjoyment. I like the Dōjutsu, the protagonist is likeable, his actions have been smart and his morality being Chaotic Neutral is great to see since I love Neutral characters. The only real criticism I have would be that his development in a certain Kinjutsu should’ve been expanded upon by showing us his struggles and thought process in developing, it’s a-bit hard to believe even with his resources that he can accomplish that when he has such a poor talent in everything else. His apprenticeship was also hard to believe but I like it and your direction. Add in that it’s not impossible for it to happen and I'm fine with it, that’s all the constructive criticism I’ve got. Keep up the fantastic work, and I’m looking forward to the future of your story!

4mth
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Fortunate_Soul

This story is annoying as fuck. Mostly because of just how erattic MC's power level seems to be. In one scene, he's walking around Suna as if he's stronger than all the shinobi there and could get away with them easily. In another scene, he's running away from his Sensei (a Jounin), like a little bitch. That's not even mentioning how he goes around killing civilians (innocent men, women and children) without any romarse or a second thought just because he wanted some more chakra. Finally, we get to MC's technique. He can apparently see incredibly far away and in almost invisible to other people's chakra sense. And this ability lasts as long as the author requires it of him. And then 'plot' happens and MC has suddenly forgotten or neglected to use his technique and finds himself facing enemy shinobi. This fic is pretty decent but shit like this makes it incredibly frustrating to read.

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CLO2610
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This story is awesome cant wait for more

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JAYOP
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I really liked it honestly post more and if anyone can recommend me noromance fan fiction with a villain like mc it would be nice and if possible noharem because I am not able to find quality work like thiss every story I see it have harem and romance I am tired of it😀

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Abyssalidiot_

honestly the author is cooking here lowkey... the Main Charactere has an actual impact on the story as we watch it change and tho not many interactions with the cast we will see as i said the author is cooking something let him cook

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Fluf_Bacon

Pretty fun story to read. It read smoothly and I don't remember any errors. I like the dojutsu you created for the MC. This story just obliterated canon and it's awesome. I enjoy how MC is chaotic neutral but also intelligent.

1mth
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Haze_
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I really like the concept of the story and how its written, the mc, the pacing, the plot besides Danzo.

1mth
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Atrox_H

Loving this so far, a different take on Naruto from the usual fanfic troops. Really liking the progress so far, keep up the good work Author. Much intrigued to see how far the MC goes and when will he meet his sensei officially. All the best Author !!!

3mth
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KingPumpkin3

Ohhh I just love his ability it makes me very happy

3mth
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Snoax
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Everything is perfect, except for a few plot holes at the start. But still, great quality, frequent updates, etc.

4mth
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pacul
LV 13

Definitely one of the best Naruto fanfic in this platform, unique ability with an MC with IQ higher than room temperature is so rare these days. though there's still some incongruity such as the leap in logic for some plot devices but overall it is a very enjoyable read

4mth
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edgy
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so many bot reviews what the fuck!???? if my review isn't deleted than thank me for saving your time

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dbzislye_yourgy

The author did a great job—definitely one of the best Naruto fanfics, in my opinion.

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SomeLordsBastard

I challenge anyone to name a better naruto fic. Well-written, Plot, Feels like a naruto fic. Not a canon following theft. Absolutely marvelous.

1mth
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Caitlyn_3645

This is the best story I've ever read on WebNovel like 😗✌🏻💙💛💗💙💖💙💛 The writing is so good and the plot gets me so hooked. It's literally life changingggggg

1mth
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Daoist91wth0

I love your story! I wish there were more Updates!!!

2mth
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The_8th_king

Very good, just focus on some character interaction though, a little drama would be nice

3mth
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