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Penulis: Adamo_Amet

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Marked by the cursed Darksign, Naruto Uzumaki finds himself tethered to two worlds: the unforgiving lands of Dark Souls and the shinobi realm of ninja. How will a world of Dark souls face a Chosen Undead with chakra? And how will the shinobi world confront a warrior reborn in the Lands of Lordran?

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DaoistuBDitW

Good start, nice way of blending the world. I don't have much knowledge about Dark Souls, but it is quite intriguing. The only problem I felt was the use of "Oh Kami", it just destroys the flow of the story, as the rest are delivered in English and "Kami" is japanese. There is nothing wrong with using it, but as a reader I felt it disrupts the flow of the content as I read.

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Rayama

One of the Best, if not The Best beginning I've ever read in all my time in Webnovel. Sentences roll Smoothly, Long satisfying chapters, No Repeating Sentences and Characters have actual Depth and Morals. From what I can see of this promising fanfic is that the author of this fanfic is truly passionate about his work, I hope you continue that way. šŸ¤™

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VesperNebula

A genuine review. For me, this story is a 4.8. The character interactions are well thought out, the world-building is interesting, and even the Souls world is incredibly well done. I absolutely loved what you did with the NPCs. The only reason Iā€™m not giving it a full 5 is because of a few moments that frustrated meā€”not because they were bad, but just due to my personal taste. I personally prefer a protagonist whoā€™s more intelligent and doesnā€™t take much nonsense (basically: near-perfect). Itā€™s a bit of a childish preference, but thatā€™s just how it is for me. Seeing how Naruto interacts, how the other ninjas act around him, and his lack of sharpness when it comes to figuring out certain important things heā€™s overlooking really frustrates me! But thatā€™s not nearly enough to make me dislike the story. In fact, itā€™s actually a great thingā€”it shows how well the author has given Naruto a consistent and solid personality instead of making him bounce between ā€œperfectā€ and ā€œidiotā€ like many fanfics tend to do. My only concern is the future of the story. Personally, Iā€™d find it ridiculous if, later on, ninja world characters became as strong as Naruto or somehow ended up in the Dark Souls world (for example, Naruto bringing them there). I really hope that doesnā€™t happen. BUT, even if it does, I definitely wonā€™t drop this story. The author has proven to be highly capable at writing and developing the plot, and when they do something questionable, they provide solid reasoning behind it. So, Iā€™ll always give the benefit of the doubt and see where things go next. Excellent workā€”keep it up~!

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BlandName2406

I legit never do a review. I mostly just give power stones. But please x20ā€¦ donā€™t drop this. This is an amazing and beautiful piece of art. This is actually amazing and got mad that I have to wait for another chapter. I 100% recommend this to anyone. Even if you havenā€™t read Dark Souls; it is like reading an original series. 5 stars no problem.šŸ˜Œ

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Absolute PEAK finally a good ds fic, keep cooking author, you're making a lotta people really happy hehe . . .. .. . .. . ... . . . . . .. . .

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CasualReader1

good stuff. well written and the story is interesting. sadly it's not a premade novel. so i have to wait for the update.

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daniel_rivera_2588

Es interesante en el desarrollo de personajes con Ʊas tramas que ofrecen este autor..................................................................................................................................

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DaoistcaxvL7

It would be better if the story flowed more according to the original story. ...................... . .......... ......... ........ ......

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noamifargan

peak that all i can really say . keep it up, Author. I really think you got something good in here

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Havga
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One of the best Naruto fanfiction,if is the best. I love the development of characters and relationship,Dark Souls world and element was great I didn't play but I love what the author doing it. Thank you author for this amazing story.

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Tyler_rigby

so fucking good it's insane k k

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Mahenzz

Very good book. Well fleshed out ideas behind the combination of the dark souls and naruto power structures that allow for loop holes and insane scaling. I think your version of the characters do a great job of resembling the original source material while extrapolating how things would and are changing because of the new additions to the story. Naruto being a little edgy is good for his health I think and the only time I cringed at the writing was the Kiba incident but it wasnā€™t enough to break immersion so whatever. I am a little annoyed by the misunderstanding arc with Kakashi rn but it is understandable and written well enough that I donā€™t mind it too much. I hope that it get cut down soon with at least Kakashi or someone else pn the team to feel that release of ā€œat least someone knowsā€. But thats just me and if you want it to spiral out of control Iā€™ll still read it. Very entertaining. Much cool. šŸ‘

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Shanhe11916

This has so far been a blast to read. Keep up the good work.

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Shnezz

Honestly, I didn't have high hopes. I read this because I needed a new story to keep me busy because nothing else I read had updated. This blew me away. It was honestly really good. Way more well-written and even emotional than I expected. Interactions that are so cliche in Naruto fics, like dealing with Hiruzen, actually felt fresh and good to read in this. This stands out as a good, unique blend of two worlds. I came looking for copper and I found gold. This one's in my library going forward, for sure.

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Dinesh_Panda

gret love it [img=gift][img=strong][img=update][img=recommend][img=golden ticket][img=disgusted][img=exp][img=nervous][img=strong][img=thinking]

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Patrick_Hardy

So far this story is really good keep up the good work

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UnsuspctingVilager

If you don't choose Deprived class, it doesn't count, just saying. Praise the Sun.

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Guts0626

Man... WHAT A STORY!!! I remember seeing this story back in the beginning, when it still had a few chapters. I looked at it and said: "No, let's wait a little longer." Then, 3 months later, I remembered this story by looking at Basil_Menderrat303's profile (by the way, thank you very much, man šŸ‘), and seeing that it already had more than 90 chapters I said: "Hmm, let's see..." And man... WHAT AN AMAZING STORY!!! It had been a long time since I read such a good Naruto story, and ESPECIALLY Dark Souls. The writing, dialogues, frequency and humor of this story are very good. But, the main highlight goes to the CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. I love how practically each character in this story has their own arcs, layers (as the great Shrek would say) and how each of them is well-detailed here. The author is clearly in no rush to tell his story and wants to show how each character changes and evolves with the influence of Naruto and his new abilities. BUT... Although this story is really good, the pace is VERY SLOW !!! To give you an idea, it was only now in the most recent chapters (95 currently) that the Land of Waves Arc began. It turns out that the author is quite detailed with his story (which is quite admirable, actually), but I believe that this ends up making it a bit drawn out and tiring at times. To the point that I myself had to skip some parts. But of course, this is much more MY OPINION than anything else, but I believe that this is something that may put some people off reading this story. But all in all, this is easily one of the best Naruto stories and one of the best Dark Souls stories in the entire Webnovel. Overall, an ABSOLUTE CINEMA STORY!!! So please, GIVE THIS STORY A CHANCE!!! YOU WON'T REGRET IT!!! (Google Translator)

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