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Naruto: Shinobi Hunter
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Hitman of the Shinobi World - Toji Fushiguro
after dying from Purple Satoru Gojo
Toji found himself in the world of Shinobi
where he will continue his usual activities
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Honestly, a really great idea for the fanfic, but its execution is terrible. Grammar is not good, possibly because it seems like it might be translated. Little to no dialogue, and they don't even add " " to show someone is speaking. They don't show Toji's thoughts for being reincarnated, ending up in the shinobi world, or anything else. He just trains and then works as a mercenary, nothing else interesting happens. He barely meets anyone or talks to anyone. Anyways, I gave a 2.4/5
its not bad it has potential and i wanted to say something but i forgot what i totally wanted to say oh ik noow no i dont i forgot its actually good not bad but a grammar and do "" when someone is talking