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Naruto: Senju Rebirth
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After Transmigrating in the body of a senju boy. Senju Tetsuya will Try to survive in the Naruto World.
I'm just a beginner so advices and opinion on how make the story better are appreciated
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The story is face pace but I don't like the writing style. It's just a detailed report with a narration of everything. all fight scenes and story progression are all summed up like a detailed report. The thing I like about this novel is that MC didn't gain flying Raijin randomly like most fanfic, he doesn't have the talent to use it. The best part, he doesn't have a sharingan like 90% of FF. This book had potential if the author could stop writing everything like detailed information at an extremely face pace.
it has a fast paced story but it works and is very entertaining. This is a refreshing story since every other ff that I read was either stuck at their genin or chunin arcs and is very long like 300+ chapters long and they are still at their genin arc. highly recommend this fic
this story is good , the mc is not a maniac of power or a system cheater , the flow is fluid and good , the story go straight to the point , i reccomand this story
even though this story is fast paced it works well as it shows all the important stuffs and skipping useless stuffs like childhood friendship etc etc good work my man