Naruto: I'm In Kumo (Up for adoption)

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oceansage

Story was pretty good until mc went to konoha. Mc is from kumo, goes to konoha for chunin exam, but start to rolplay as Kakashi. Can you imagine the sheer stupidity required to do this. If that's not enough, he saves Hayate ( a side character), all because MC has seen him on TV, so he must protect him, which resulted in him being mind read by konoha. And despite Raikage being present in konoha, he didn't objected at all. Logic - 100.👍 In short, story was genuinely nice enough, until author made mc to start sucking c*cks of konoha characters, all because he has seen them on TV. 👏👏

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ara_k

5/5, I love your writing. After the first naruto fanfic that I read from you (thrown into naruto) I couldn't wait to read another one, and this one passed my expectations, I love it. Hope you won't drop this.

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Roktah

the story is very bland, the system makes everything easy and hands out op rewards for the most menial tasks. mc's character is the main reason this whole story seems listless

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TheDangerousDino

Surprise surprise, a system story I can enjoy. Light hearted, funny and quickly progresses. Mc is snarky, imaginative ( not sure if that applies too much when u have a system) and occasionally silly. So far I’ve been enjoying that the numbers don’t mean too much. In actuality without the system he’d just have a 100%-300% learning buff. not sure it gamer mind and body will be significant in coming arcs. Otherwise side character are entertaining but lack depth. Further down the line i hope in the future the author will make him truly unique, im sure there’s many ways the do so. It’s only 6 chapters in so I can’t say much other than I enjoy it and will be following for future. :)

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Mirio_kun

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Gd_Sys

More eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee More eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee More eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Di_Scipline

Good novel................................. what's the update schedule if any ? and are you planning on writing this all the way to the end ?

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SSpextrillex

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.

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Cynical_Lie

I enjoyed it, just simple enough that although it may run out of ideas for the story, I'd be satisfied enough for what is there. I'm awaiting updates

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Anthony59000

Bonne histoire avec du potentiel. Quelques imcompréhentions par moment mais je suis impatient de lire la suite. Petit conseil: develloper le combat avec Sasuke. Merci

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you18q8mystery

Please continue great story- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

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RuberDF

I'm honestly liking it so far, the speed of progression isn't too fast Just hoping for no sudden romance out of the blue. Though I would suggest Kaguya or Hinata as a romance >_> just saying

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killersoul

so far so good i suppose thou you skip a lot not really enough chapters out for a real review so i just felt like making this one to say that ypu should make an auxiliary chapter with all his skills and what exactly they do also kinda wondering when the mc got in the world but eh

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Gin_toki_v2

So far it's really good, and I can't wait to read more. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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LifelessMan

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Genotem

good story, it's rare to read self inserts with the mc starting other than in Konoha, although it is in the system the progression is not exaggerated. The story is well written and enjoyable to read. Thank you

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maxphantom

bro, your writing is top quality. pls, complete your other fanfics. ,