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Naruto: Fate
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is it Fate?!
A Boy Born with the Bloodline of an Uchiha and Uzumaki
but what is Interesting is the Boy is like Day and Night,
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Anda Mungkin Juga Menyukai
2Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
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I took a look at the first chapter, and the grammar is horrible. I will not be reading the rest of this story, and I more than likely will not come back to re-read it. Overall I don't recommend this to anyone literate.
Need grammar check and as for the harem you go with mei,sambui,ino,yugito, and mabui.Although the plot line will be long because of how to get them all in a harem it it will be worth it.