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Naruto: Created Madara at the beginning
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Here's the revised text with the Chinese name changed to a Japanese one and the grammar checked:
**[Naruto, invincible, system, time travel, villain, fanfiction]**
Takeshi Kuroyama obtained the combat power template of "The Founding of Konoha Era Madara" and came to Konoha in the early stage of the plot to become the new ninja Shura Uchiha Madara!
“Hei Jue, this time it’s my turn to speak to you from the bottom of my heart.”
“Obito, remember, you are just a pawn!”
“Finally, I want to say...”
“Hashirama! I have reached the other side!!”
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it was good and i enjoyed it a lot. thould i would like mc paired with tsunade . no offense she is the best waifu
i thought i was reading a naruto fanfic not a broly SI who cant even hear a name .......................................................................