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Naruto: Cautious Ninja
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Naruto is many things; troublesome, wild, unpredictable, adventurous, untamable, unique. But there's a benefit to being wild and unpredictable; no one has the faintest idea what you're going to do next
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It's not really bad, I just think the strength is a bit unbalanced, is he already facing a Gato? And he is apparently 10 years old, another confusing thing is the passage of time, and also some dialogues. It can improve with time, I would give it a 7.5 out of 10, I also found it strange how he learned his unique "jutsu"
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The name of this story is "Drifiting" and it was written by AlphaDelta1001 on the fanfiction website. If you're going to copy someone's work so blatantly and use it to profit, the least you can do is give due credit to the true author of that story.
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