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Naruto : Black Rinne-Sharingan at the start
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God's child killed a boy who was walking on the road of Manhattan.
God realising it's his child's fault,so he gave 5 lucky draw to reincarnate the boy without any memories.
Ding - Congratulations you have won the world 'Naruto'
Ding - Congratulations you have won two Kekkei mōra (1. All killing ash bones.& 2. A pair of Black Rinnesharingan)
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Frist 20 chapters was awesome but later the story development became mid like Chinese cliche fan fic and mc starting developing an fétish to catch girls for an future harem it's kinda sad because he interacted and demonstrated like 10+ chapters about how he love ino etc just to later make this fan fic an Harem
its good but there a bit of question from my part ... if you gave him something like rinnegan why did you remove his memory ... or is it just at early part so that he will not change the start of the canon or what ??
please don't put harem and concentrate on concept as the harem fanfics lack the emotions... and feel of the story make the mc a degenerate
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What's the point of setting a reincarnation tag if you are gonna wipe out his memory??????? ............................................ ......................
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Cringest story ever written by a 12 yo girly emo kid...................................................................................................
Bro i cant, the way he makes the boy mc feminine asl when he's a kid just not it for me.
Your very everyday fanfic, I will give 5 stars Your very everyday fanfic, I will give 5 stars Your very everyday fanfic, I will give 5 stars
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welp at the start I like it but I don't like novels that mc have 2 wife but for the people who like it then nice but not my cup of tea..... [img=faceslap]
I’ve caught up completely with the story so far and think it’s actually pretty enjoyable with how the characters interact so far. Only complaints I have are that the grammar is pretty awful, and I’m no grammar guru but wish they at least had some proofreading or someway to fix the problems. If there was correct grammar even with the story seemingly developing relatively quickly, I believe it could be 5 stars
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ThIS FF is good and the story is interesting. Liked the story so far and the way its headed towards, just hope that You Author will not drop this one and keep writing. About the troupe of the story where he loses his previous lifetime's memory, i dont have anything to say about it since its your fic and how you write it is up to u The one thing i wanted to say is from the signs which shows MC will have more than 3 wifey's, I just hope you don't make them Trophy girls and give them proper screen time and a personality in their relationship with the MC. That's all stay safe, stay healthy and bring out more chapters.
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At start i thought that this fan fic gonna focus in slice of life by seeing how seriously the mc takes his parent last words to not search for vengeance and not cares about Sasuke path insted focus on his life future for example use all the books he's Readed and use that knowledge + to become an higt grade in konoha like from junior consultant to Hokage consultant i don't think sarutobi would mind it as we saw in some chapters back he's maked mc junior consultant because he's dont have uchiha hatred and remind him how he becomed thrid hokage by insisting to stay with tobirama and buy time for his team and be chosen to become thrid hokage for his determination etc...
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Rest fic.. a pity it dropped.. I had a few things I wasn’t okay with and a few questions that were left unanswered.. other than that, it’s still a more than decent fic
meh. When i saw the "masacre" chapter i knew that this is not for me. Just as always, if mc is an uchiha, he can't change anything about his clan. And the author chose to erased his memory of his past life so that the canon story will not change. Haiyaaaaa