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Naruto - Neglected Sage
4.21 (70 peringkat)
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Naoko and Mito Uzumaki-Namikaze where hailed as the heroes of Konoha since the Yin and Yang Chakra of the Nine tailed fox were sealed inside them. They got all the attention they've ever want, while their brother Naruto was neglected by their parents and occasionally beat up by the villagers for claiming to be the son of their hero Minato.
Will the number one most unpredictable, hyperactive, knuckle head ninja bring about peace under such circumstances or will he never be the same again as his rage brings forth the apocalypse as fortold by the prophecy of the toad sage? Also, would a purple haired, moon eyed, Kunoichi mend his shattered heart? Find out on the next Dragonball- *cough* I mean just read it.
Another Naruto Fanfiction.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or any of the other characters from different anime and games I will reference in this Novel.
Rinnegan Naruto, Natural Sage Body, Dark Slayer Naruto, OP Naruto
Pairings: NaruHina and Harem later on
Some of the early SENTENCES(not the whole novel) were derived from novels that were cleared for adoption. This is not plagiarized as it has already been authorized for use. See the link below.
Here's the link to the originals:
https://m.fanfiction.net/community/Neglected-Naruto/123535/
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Naruto is an attention wh*re, he has been abused, discriminated and all, but he still want to become hokage? What fucking no sense is this? You said you are gonna make him dark, but I only see another annoying hero-complex mc
This is good. But don't even try to get into the "To harem or to not harem" comment wars. War never changes. The side that stays silent are the winners but are also the victims.
Please change the pairings on the prologue section it says Naruhina which is why I started reading this but it changed to harem which the voting that took place and now its a harem I don't like harems so I would like it if you changed it to Harem so other people like me don't waste there time reading a book they thought was a no-harem when its a harem. Thanks for reading this I hope you take my request into consideration.
I somehow get an insight that this is just the same with another fanfiction where Naruto will bring peace. I just doesn't Know why you put something about apocalyptic when you all (all author that did this) just make Naruto become a Hero and bring peace. It just too ordinary if not for you then at least for me
Harem will ruin it ...,.......................NO ..............HAREM .,......... PLEASE i want the story to continue with some romance and jealousy and competition over naruto but not harem ok... that's my view because you might lose some readers over harem sir
Honestly it started off really well before the 5 year time Skip where he became a beta bยกtch and starts forgiving people for all the crap they did not to mention going soft
This is the most amazing fan fic of naruto I've read it really seems well planned I really live this I think everyone who comes across this should read it it really is a really good book
I hope you recover author, rarely see a great pontifical in a novel and seriously I love this novel is that it can get very high in ranking over time and not forgive so fast to the family of naruto that lasts that has many seasons to forgive them that is not a single shot since I feel that it is opening fast to their twin sisters
I don't know if 17 chapters were good enough to make a review out of it, but I'll give it anyway. And there will be spoilers if you don't know already First off, my first impression of this novel when I first saw it (not read it) was meh. I was thinking in some lines of 'typical Naruto fanfic' where Naruto is reincarnated to the past, or someone reincarnated into Naruto, or a 'version' of Naruto's childhood situation except worse. But then I got to read it and boy I literally almost cried the first few chapters because of how everyone, except Hinata, treated him. I can't give anymore because it will be in the realm of spoiler so I will continue to my actual review. The grammar of this novel is great, like seriously great. It was readable and with the author's style of writing, the author can convey the emotions of the characters almost perfectly. Or probably I'm just a human with fragile little heart. For me, with the quality of this novel, the stability of updates were good. Well, every novel with a good story sometimes can only update 1 chapter per one to five days. Since I just finished reading the latest chapter (which is chapter 17), I still don't have any problems. The story was perfect. As one of the commentors or reviewers here said, "like a breath of fresh air" it was literally that. I have seen a lot of Naruto fanfictions where Naruto was alone and badly treated by the villagers, where another person reincarnated as Naruto, or even Naruto that was reincarnated back into his child self. This story was kind of a twist of the second one with a bit more emotional touches here and there. This also develops Naruto as a character realistically. What I mean was how normal people should behave when he/she was badly treated with almost everyone on his surroundings. I don't even understand what character design means so I will just said what I think. The characters are good but not really realistic, including Naruto. Like how come Naruto still dreaming about becoming a hokage, while his parents ignored him in most of his childhood (Yup, Minato and Kushina), adding his twin younger sisters into the mix. Sure, I get it if he still wanted a recognition from the villagers but I don't understand if he wanted a recognition from his family. I think this will probably change when Naruto gets older though. For the world background, sorry but no comment for that. I'll just give you 5* on this one. Overall, this is a good novel and I recommend it. While I do like harem stories, some people don't. Its not like I wanted to harm this novel but for anyone that hate harem, you can still read it but wait until like 30 to 50 chapters or something. Because the way Naruto and Hinata interacts made it seem like this novel won't have a harem. But in the synopsis, the author said about having a harem so... yeah.
Membuka SPOILER
Great novel with some different flavour to it, looking forward to future updates ( I'll vote 2 stone's a day for an upload ,{this isn't bribe })
I hope you do not forget to teach a lesson to the sisters before integrating them into the harem, nor would it make sense if Hinata accepted them in the harem after seeing Naruto alone for years, they are more to blame than their parents for stealing the love of their parents, obviously with intent, I believe that they contributed to their loneliness just to have the big brother to themselves, plus their obsession for naruto that only hurts because they have never seen their room, the two sisters never if they cared to pay attention on naruto, never celebrated naruto's birthday, they just want to have naruto for themselves and treat it like a fragile toy, really? It is incredible that readers also accept the two crazy prostitutes in the harem, but okay, give them a hard lesson and make naruto and hinata plus OP
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It is an amazing story u made,i loved the part whn u made naruto strong in an instant,and naruto's chemestry with hinata was too well shown.
Membuka SPOILER
I finished this in one day, where's the rest? I demand more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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please come back soon I want to continue reading your novel, it has already become my favorite novel and if it serves as something serious you have to forgive the whole family by telling the sisters that if it does it very quickly the meaning of the whole story
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Welp here we are. I'm gonna answer a few questions first. Yes, I'm back writing No, this isn't a regular thing I'm gonna update when I can and when I want to No, I'm not going to continue my other novel since it was a collaboration work with my ex. Yes, I'm single Now to the novel It's a Naruto Fanfiction that's it.